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>I'm sitting at my key-board, frantically trying to get
>my mail-box cleared out before the power goes (three
>inches of snow on the ground and still coming down
>hard) when I see a story by D.F. Roeder. A short
>story.
>A few minutes reading . . .what could it hurt?
DFR laughs evilly in the background... ^_~
>LOL!!! <ouch> I think I hurt my-self.
>(At the TABLE? RICE?)LOL! Ohhhhhh, that hurt. ^_*
^_^
>Good job as always.
Thanks, allyn.
>(my only criticism is that, IMO only, you _might_ have
>gone just a weeeeeeeeeeee bit overboard with your use
>of {giiiive, yoooouuuu, etc.}
Yeah. It's hard figuring out how to notate a musically held syllable
or sound in just printed words.
>Very nice overall.
>(now if I can only get an image of Akane with Ran-chan
>slung over her shoulder out of my mind. <brrrrrrr>)
>^_*
Hehehehe. I suppose this fic could be construed as service for the
Akane fans, as well. Oh, well. Whichever. ^_^
Thanks for commenting, allyn.
Ja!
Dave
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