Subject: [FFML] Re: [Eva][fanfic?] The many kinds of wimps
From: Rebeka Thomas
Date: 10/22/2000, 8:09 PM
To: Adrian Tymes
CC: ffml@fanfic.com



Rebeka Thomas wrote:
Edmund Wong wrote:
        As the computer and mathematical types would see it, it goes like this:
performance = motivation = (total_interest - self_pity)

Needs a period at the end.  Mathematical formulas don't need them on
their own, but anything inserted into a sentence is still inserted into
the sentence, and the sentence needs a period at its send.

It actually resembles a computer statement more than a mathematical
formula, and that needs a semicolon at the end. that will also offset
the awkwardness of having a right paren followed by a period.

If this was all code, or even multiple lines of code, then yes.  My
point is that the surrounding context - namely, a work of fiction in
English, rather than a computer program - dictates the grammar rules.

My suggestion was a semicolon followed by a period, actually.

The form this fic manifests itself as is a test of my English literacy
skills. More than anything, it is proof to myself that I can write about
more than classes and linked lists in English.

I'd say the proof is successful, at least for a true/false test.

true/false as in csh or sh? the difference is csh has 0/1 for true/false
while sh has 1/0.

True as in the English use of the term.  ;P

heh.



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