Okay kids, I finshed with everything except for the traditional school
play that I have to direct for the kiddies at the school I teach in. After
that semestral break begins. Anyway, since this thing has
been waiting a long time, I'm going to just slam it all down in an
orgy of endless reading, editing and, of course, writing and typing.
This SLR will cover the Synopses List for August 25, September 8,
September 15, September 22, September 29 and October 8.
I love my life. ^_^
Disclaimer:
As always, everything is mine. All comments should be sent to me.
Thank you very much.
[Can you say really, really, really, really, really, really late?]
Oh, yes, I can. ^_^
The FFML Synopses List
======================
For the week of: August 25, 2000
Moderator on Duty: Nikholas "Switch" F. Toledo
Synopses Submitted: 22 (3 for the month before, 6 for the weekend)
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[Macross]
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Title: Tales of the Wanderer Book 2: Wandering Ace
Genre: insertion
Series: Robotech
Author: Star Ranger
Email: starrngr@aol.com
Homepage: http://home.talkcity.com/TheSanitarium/Da_Muck/
Archived at
http://home.talkcity.com/TheSanitarium/da_muck/LIbr/totw2.htm
Title Summary:
Cast out from his home dimension, the Wanderer hops from universe to
universe, looking for the way home. Unfortunately, this has brought him
to the Robotech universe. At least he's on the SDF-1 instead of on the
Earth itself.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 5: Acceptance (Repost)
Date Sent to FFML: August 26, 2000
Archive Number: 13826
Size: 24 KB
Episode Summary:
The wanderer manages to prove his bona-fides, and wins himself a place
in the RDF as a pilot.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 6: Turnabout
Date Sent to FFML: August 26, 2000
Archive Number: 13825
Size: 24 KB
Episode Summary:
Rick Hunter doesn't know quite what to make of his new pilot, but he
knows how to find out...
Mass Review:
Okay, since I show up for a cameo in this one this automatically recommends
it for instant readership. ^_^
Anyway, a very nicely written work for an SI, though most of the problem for
this one is the pacing. It could have been much longer, you know, if it went a
bit slower on the pace. The descriptions are nice but they're a bit sparse at
times.
I know, I know, I maybe asking too much, but Jamie Wilde spoiled me with
his Saotome Gambit and now I'm expecting that certan level of narration for
my space operas. The piece already has shine, all it needs is a few more
doodads and polish to make it a real masterpiece. Keep up the good work.
recommended for a light read.
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[Monster Rancher]
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Title: The Pixie Chronicles 02: Ties to the Past
Genre: Drama
Author: Platinum Dragon
Email: Platinum_Dragon@usinternet.com
Homepage: http://dragonsanime.com, http://dragonsanime.com/pixieshrine,
http://www.usinternet.com/users/platinum_dragon
Archived at
http://www.usinternet.com/users/platinum_dragon/misc/ties.txt
Date Sent to FFML: August 22, 2000
Archive Number: 13690
Size: 132 KB
Summary:
Pixie and Big Blue come across two pixies that are chasing a human
woman. Before she can stop them, they kill the human - but when Pixie
chases them off, she finds something that she never would have expected,
and it leads to something Pixie had long thought lost to the past.
Review:
You know, this is a bit big for a Monster Rancher fic. ^_-
Also it has more depth than I would ever have thought, but Platinum Dragon's
previous works in the field of Monster Rancher have proven me wroung once
and they prove me wrong once again.
This work is good, very good. If I were to give out a comparison, i'd rank it with
Pokemon Master in the way Mr. Dragon handles the story and the narration.
A ood command of the language and very fluid prose with the requisite nice
descriptions show this to have the makings of a classic.
Highly recommended.
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[Neon Genesis Evangelion / Cybersix]
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Title: The Newest Pilot
Genre: Fusion, Spamfic
Author: Erin
Email: the_only_cappadocian@yahoo.ca
Date Sent to FFML: August 27, 2000
Archive Number: 13844
Size: 4 KB
Summary:
A spammy fusion with Cybersix. A new pilot added to the roster means
bad news for Shin-kun.
Review:
Funny spamfic. 'Nuff said.
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[No Need for Tenchi! (Tenchi Muyo!)]
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Title: The Princess and the Pirate
Series: Tenchi OAV (w/a bit of the TV series and the movies thrown in)
Genre: Science Fiction
Author: Tatawake Komodo (I'm thinking of switching pseudonyms to this.)
Email: kyhdin@aol.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Keep/5268
Archived at http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Keep/5268/Fanfic/fanfic.html
Title Summary:
Sometime in the future, Tenchi has become the New Emperor of Jurai and
has married Sasami. But even before he is crowned, he dispatches Ryoko
and Ayeka to the planet Saradin for a mission that will have vast
repercussions.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 6 and Epilogue
Date Sent to FFML: August 15, 2000
Archive Number: 13530
Size: 15 KB
Episode Summary:
The aftermath of the battle with the Kingpin and a hint or two of what
the future holds.
- - -
Episode: Epilogue (Revision)
Date Sent to FFML: August 21, 2000
Archive Number: 13660
Size: 9 KB
Episode Summary:
Tenchi expands Ayeka's group and dispatches them on a relief mission.
Author's note:
This is just sort of a combination of a set-up for future stories and an
ending gag.
Mass Review:
Well, Komodo has finally finished this.
First of all, typos galore and the format is a bit nasty. Please try to leave
a space between the line of asterisk and the end of a scene. Well-done,
but as always, could have been better. Dialogue was a bit nice, though.
This has potential but as always polish is needed.
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[Oh My Goddess! (Ah! Megami-sama!)]
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Title: The Visitors
Genre: humor
Author: D.B. Sommer
Email: sommer@3rdm.net
Homepage: http://angcobra.jumpfun.com/dbsommer.html
Date Sent to FFML: August 14, 2000
Archive Number: 13485
Size: 13 KB
Summary:
Belldandy gets a few visitors that want to meet Keiichi.
Review:
Yeah, right, Sommer. You really didn't watch those videos. ^_-
Really funny fic, BTW.
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[Ranma 1/2]
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Title: Adulthood of a Modern Dynasty
Episode: Chapter 3: Fifty Ways For an Okonomiyaki Chef to Get Her
Cursed Husband Pregnant
Genre: Continuation, Lime
Author: Jim Lazar
Email: jimlazar@earthlink.net
Homepage: http://home.earthlink.net/~jimlazar/anime
Date Sent to FFML: August 27, 2000
Archive Number: 13836
Size: 91 KB
Title Summary:
Childhood was rough, Adulthood will break Akane and cost her dearly.
But when the fight will determine the fate of the Human Race some
sacrifices have to be made, painful as they are.
Episode Summary:
Ukyo is a woman, right? Sanma is a woman most of the time, right? Slot
A and slot B cannot make a baby, right? Now, it's easy for Sanma to
become male and knock up Ukyo with tab C, right? But how in the world
did Ukyo manage to get Sanma pregnant while Sanma was in Akane's form?
The answer may seem obvious, but the road to pregnancy is not smooth for
this couple.
Review:
You know, as time progresses, the more FFML posts get tainted with a bit of
lime. Or is it just because that most posters of the FFML are horny? ^_^
Anyway, Mr. Lazar, mixes in his traditional flair for this sort of thing with normal
storytelling. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Genma's Daughter
Genre: Alternate Universe, Drama, Serious, Shojo
Author: Deborah Goldsmith
Email: dgoldsmith@mac.com
Homepage: http://www.zebra.net/~spardue/anime/
Title Summary:
When Ranma learns the truth about his family, he is propelled on a
difficult journey of self-discovery.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 1: Ranma (Revision)
Co-Author: Steve Pardue
Date Sent to FFML: August 21, 2000
Archive Number: 13656
Size: 76 KB
Episode Summary:
Ranma meets his mother again for the first time in twelve years, and
learns the shocking truth about his family; a truth which his father
concealed from him. This forces him to confront some aspects of himself
he's tried hard to ignore.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 10: Ready or Not...
Date Sent to FFML: August 21, 2000
Archive Number: 13658
Size: 66 KB
Episode Summary:
Ranko faces failure for the first time in years, and receives a
confession of love from an unexpected suitor.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 11: Turning Points
Date Sent to FFML: August 21, 2000
Archive Number: 13665
Size: 55 KB
Episode Summary:
Ranko is forced to confront her lack of self-confidence, and lays a
festering issue to rest. Meanwhile, she gets to know her new friend
Miki. Her suitor goes through some changes himself.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 12: Adventures in Babysitting
Date Sent to FFML: August 21, 2000
Archive Number: 13685
Size: 59 KB
Episode Summary:
Are those wedding bells Ranko hears? They're giving her a headache...
- - -
Episode: Chapter 13: Too Much of a Good Thing
Date Sent to FFML: August 22, 2000
Archive Number: 13732
Size: 53 KB
Episode Summary:
Ranko finally conquers her first big challenge in violin, and thinks
about what she wants to do with her life. She meets her boyfriend's
parents, and discovers that there are worse things than having them
dislike you.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 14: Ranko
Genre: Alternate Universe, Serious, Shojo, WAFF
Date Sent to FFML: August 27, 2000
Archive Number: 13849
Size: 62 KB
Episode Summary:
The last chapter. Ranko makes some decisions about her new life, and
Genma reflects on everything that's happened to his daughter.
Mass Review:
I love this series. Yeah, I know, a lot of people complain about it but that
is part and parcel of writing a fanfic. Besides, I always come to a story
expecting it to be total crap, so I have very low or no expectations at all. ^_^
Anyway, this is a materpiece of prose. I mean it. The narrative is great, with
evocative descriptions, that you can feel the emotions. So, chuch everything
aside and read this baby. There maybe some problems accepting it, but
if you try really hard and suspend your disbelief, like every decent reader
should do, it can be quite enjoyable. Just go on for the ride.
Heck, this is almost as good as the commercially released stuff. Highly
recommended.
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Title: Kasumi 1/2
Episode: Prologue (revision)
Author: Rainman
Email: raemowse@aol.com
Homepage: http://lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/raemowse/index.html
Archived at above
Date Sent to FFML: August 24, 2000
Archive Number: 13655
Size: 13 KB
Title Summary:
Kasumi has gotten pregnant but she really shouldn't have. Now they must
deal with her pregnancy as well as all the trouble that will accompany
the world-breaking news.
Episode Summary:
Kasumi makes a trip to Tofu's clinic and receives the shock of her life
- she's pregnant! So who's the father?
Review:
Okay, let's be honest. First of all, the title makes me want to chuck this baby
in the trash bin. Anyway, after it hovered over the DEL key for awhile I
relented, remembering never to judge a book by its cover.
Try to fix the format. I don't indent in my reviews because they're informal
pieces more or less. Also you miss a few periods (pardon the pun). Also why
are there two spaces instead of one after periods. Could you at least make it
easier on my eyes?
Sorry about that, professional side taking over. Anyway, the story on the overall
is well-written, just a bit scruffy on the format side, though I don't get it. I'm willing
enough to go for a ride though.
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Title: Second Chances
Episode: Chapter 20 - Formula for Victory!
Genre: Start Over
Author: Lord Archive
Email: archive@mich.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Fuji/9061/anime.html
Date Sent to FFML: August 24, 2000
Archive Number: 13770
Size: 15 KB
Title Summary:
Akane makes a wish after the death of Ranma and ends up returning to the
day she met him. This time she plans not to repeat any of her mistakes.
(Just make a bunch of new ones.)
Episode Summary:
It's Akane versus Shampoo with Ranma as the prize. But what do the
Amazon and the time traveler have up their sleeves for this fight?
Review:
Okay, almost every regular reader of these reviews knows I love Lord Archive's
Ranma fics. This one is no exception, though I still think he should go for
longer chapters rather than these sort ones that leave me hungry for more. ^_^
Highly recommended as always.
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Title: When You're a Stranger Chapter 2 (Draft)
Genre: Alternate Universe
Author: Deb "SabreBabe" Matthews
Email: sabrebabe@bresnanlink.net
Homepage: http://members.xoom.com/sabrebabe
Date Sent to FFML: August 19, 2000
Archive Number: 13634
Size: 82 KB
Summary:
Ranma and Akane finish their school day at the Special Education center
she attends in the afternoon. Kuno stirs up more trouble, Nabiki makes
moves to counter it. Ranma discovers there's more to the school than
meets the eyes.
Author's Note:
Chapter 2 in the (unofficial) continuation of Chris Jones' "Curse of
Silence".
Review:
The entire thing is actually pretty well-written under some standards.
Good enough for me. Though it is still needs a bit of polish. The flow
of the narrative is very natural, though, something I should praise you
for.
But as I said it needs polish. Breaking off the dialogue lines with narration
lines to give emphasis, the fact that Kuno sounds intelligent, and other stuff
like that. ^_^ Also there seems to be a disruption in time. <ominous Guardian
of Time voice> Some of the scenes should be placed in the first chapter, like
the Nabiki scene.
Other than that, this is a recommended read.
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[Ranma 1/2 / SailorMoon]
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Title: Souls of Fire
Episode: #4: Electrical Burn
Genre: Continuation/Crossover
Author: Razorclaw X
Email: spiceoflife@hotmail.com
Homepage: http://www.crosswinds.net/~slythe/index.html
Date Sent to FFML: August 22, 2000
Archive Number: 13702
Size: 80 KB
Title Summary:
In the age before the Silver Millennium, a mighty empire of darkness
conquered many stars in the heavens. Their downfall marked the
beginning of the Silver Millennium, but their legacy lives on. At the
dawn of the new Age of Enlightenment marked by the rise of Crystal
Tokyo, the ancient empire of darkness is about to claim retribution....
Episode Summary:
Setting their ultimate plan into motion, the Fenril Knights launch
strategic attacks on key locations in Crystal Tokyo. Just what are they
up to?
Review:
Well, this is an excellent series. I've read the entire thing straight up to
# 10 and I must say it is quite good, though Mr. X has moments were he
is obviously standing on a soapbox and trying to say something. Well,
he does say something. Interesting ideas overall, it reminds me that I
really should get cracking on my own fic dealing with the philosophical
side of the SM cosmology, putting it into my rather psychotic worldview
as framed by Kant and Hobbes and a few other people.
Anyway, this fic is highly recommended. Well-written and very articulate
though you do have to have a bit of a background with the Mr. X's
particular universe to understand it at times.
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[Ronin Warriors (Yoroiden Samurai Troopers)/ SailorMoon]
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Title: Ronin Summer : Dark Crusade
Episode: Chapter Nine : Let Us Compare Mythologies
Genre: cross-over
Author: Morgan Hudson
Email: dataraven_659@excite.com
Homepage: http://dataraven_659.tripod.com/roninsummer.html
Date Sent to FFML: August 23, 2000
Archive Number: 13751
Size: 34 KB
Title Summary:
Seven strangers and their undead army arrive in the Dark Kingdom and
begin a holy mission of extermination, in the name of a mysterious
figure they call "Mother". Their only opposition are the Masho of the
Dynasty, but can four Yoroiden succeed alone? Of course not, but
fortunately there's help waiting in the wings...
Episode Summary:
The final of the seven siblings -Tuls- is introduced, and on the prowl.
Nasuti reveals to Kayura and the Outer Senshi that Pedri might actually
be "l'esprit d'amour propre", an ancient and foul tempered god. Rajura
and Setsuna have yet another of their friendly conversations, and Erdge
has a talk with her favorite possession.
Review:
Gawd, why can't I write like him!?!?!?! ^_^
I can't stop raving about Mr. Hudson's fics. The man is a genius!
The fic is very well-written and it is a great read. I promise that you'll enjoy it.
And while you're you're at it peruse his other fics in the series.
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[SailorMoon]
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Title: Shades of Gray
Episode: Prologue: One More Day
Genre: Drama
Author: Aaron Nowack
Email: anowack@juno.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/anowack/
Archived at http://www.geocities.com/anowack/prodraft2.txt
Date Sent to FFML: August 20, 2000
Archive Number: 13647
Size: 21 KB
Title Summary:
Pharaoh 90 has been defeated, and now the Senshi, both Inner and Outer,
can relax. At least for a few months, right? Wrong. Within days of
the Death Busters' defeat, an old enemy returns, and a new force enters
the battle. Is this force friend or foe to the Senshi? Or even both?
Join everyone's favorite sailor-suited heroines as they struggle to find
out.
Episode Summary:
One day before the fall of the Moon Kingdom, those who will fight in the
final battle either prepare themselves for conflict or struggle to
prevent the coming cataclysm. But despite the hopes of all three sides,
in one day the greatest civilization in the history of humanity will be
no more. Wait a minute, _three_ sides?
Review:
You know, I'm seeing a trend of SM fics going into the genre of no-good-no-evil
philosophies. ^_^
Well, at least it gives SM more of an edge without edging into the Dark genre.
This seems to be quite promising. I'll be watching.
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Title: Stardust
Episode: Chapter 1
Genre: Original
Author: Meagen
Email: meagen@fcmail.com
Homepage: http://members.fortunecity.com/meagen/
Date Sent to FFML: August 26, 2000
Archive Number: 13824
Size: 19 KB
Title Summary:
Somewhere around 2040, 10-year-old Catherine, moonie, gets drafted by
Sailor Senshi United. With her new partner and guardian, Sailor
Andromeda, she will soon live more adventures than all nine animated
Senshi combined.
Episode Summary:
During a quiet patrol, Moonie and Andromeda stumble on the first of many
weird happenings to come.
Review:
Surprisingly enough this is quite good. Don't get fooled by the crappy
formatting or that really irritating scene-breaker. Also the fact that it
reads a bit like an SI. I think the writer _is_ a ten-year-old, so be gentle. ^_^
My advice here is to clean up the formatting and get a more eye-friendly
scene break, a row asterisks perhaps.
Other than that this is actually pretty good. Just try to polish it up.
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[SailorMoon / Buffy: the Vampire Slayer]
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Title: To Dance By Moonlight
Episode: Part Two: Uneasiness
Genre: Crossover
Author: Quicksilver
Email: mbsilvana@yahoo.com
Homepage: http://quicksilverslabyrinth.homestead.com
Archived at http://www.fanfiction.net/master.cfm?action=story-
read&storyid=62481
Date Sent to FFML: August 22, 2000
Archive Number: 13727
Size: 20 KB
Title Summary:
Tsukino Usagi is visiting the US... in Sunnydale. While some the town's
more unique residents recognize the fact that she's a magnet for
trouble, our little Odango seems completely oblivious to the danger all
around.
Episode Summary:
Buffy begins to get suspicious of Tsukino Usagi, and her boyfriend,
Chiba Mamoru.
Review:
You know I just watch a Japanese show that looked like a blatant rip-off
of Buffy, except that instead of one Buffy-like character it had four and
the Giles character is a babe with a propensity for wearing spaghetti straps
and tight, tight pants or cut-off shorts. Really weird.
Anyway, after that weird tangent, we come to the fic. It has this really big
formatting problem. Try to fix that, along with most of punctuations. The
prose style just seems
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The FFML Synopses List
======================
For the week of: September 8, 2000
Moderator on Duty: Sean Connor
Synopses Submitted: 10
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[Dirty Pair / Iria]
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Title: Should Old Acquaintance Be Forgot chapter 3
Series: Dirty Pair/ Iria: Zeiram, the Animation
Genre: Crossover
Author: D.B. Sommer
Email: sommer@3rdm.net
Homepage: http://angcobra.jumpfun.com/dbsommer.html
Date Sent to FFML: 9/9/00
Size: 93K
Summary:
Kei, Yuri, and Iria land on a planet to try to dig up some informaiton
on Zeiram, only someone else comes a calling to make sure they get no
answers... ever again.
Review:
Well, another action-packed chapter of the bloodbath. ^_^
I really loved Zeiram when I first watched it, so I really liked this one, too.
As always, the fic has D.B.'s trademark flair and style with words, along
with his knack for injecting humor into any situation. Except for the fact that
my copy's formatting was really crappy, it's a great piece of work.
Highly reommended.
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[Evangelion]
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Title: A Little Different
Series: Evangelion
Author: James Lee
Email: JLee100441@aol.com
Homepage:http://members.aol.com/JLee100441/page/index.htm
Date Sent to FFML:Sep 9, 2000
Size: 5K
Summary:
After ditching her date at the fair, Asuka catchs Kaji kissing
Misato. Not wanting to go home (Thats where the happy couple are
headed), she goes to NERV HQ where she ends up kissing someone who is
not Shinji.
Review:
My thoughts about this work can be expressed in the simple, elegant words of
my mentor as she looked over my thesis proposal back in my college days: I
don't get it.
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[Evangelion / Xenogears]
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Title: Xenogenesis
Episode: 1
Series: Xenogears/NGE
Genre: Fusion
Author: Kichigai
Email: Kichigai@tds.net
Homepage: http://come.to/Kichigai
Date Sent to FFML: 09/04/00
Size: 34k
Title Summary:
Alien plagues have decimated the world and strange monsters follow.
Massive secret organizations vie for control of the new world, and
angels welcome people back to Eden.
Episode Summary:
Fei Wong, a bright young man, is discovered to possess a power that
will allow him to pilot an evangelion, if the Eva doesn't kill him
first.
Review:
Let's first mention that I'm not exactly a big fan of Xenogears. Other
than that this is pretty good fic. It does have the occasional typo, of
course. On the overall, good prose and nice smooth dialogue, though
I suggest cleaning up the presentation/format a bit. It hurts my eyes.
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[Patlabor]
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Title: Patlabor: On the Run
Chapter: 1-4 (repost) and 5
Series: Patlabor
Genre: Eh...
Author: David A. Tatum
Email: desaix@sysnet.net
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Athens/Acropolis/7872/fanfics.htm
Archived at: Above at some future point... (probably not until I finish
the thing)
Date Sent to FFML: 9/9/00
Archive Number: 14156; 14167
Series Summary:
Asuma is accused of the murder of his father.
Chapter Summary:
[1-4]
Asuma is arrested for the murder of his father; Ohta and Noa argue
about Asuma's guilt or innocence; Noa breaks Asuma out of jail; Noa
and Asuma retreat to a ski lodge and meet Richard Wong; Matsui, Gotoh,
and Kanuka start an internal investigation of the police; and more...
[5]
Wong takes Takeo skiing; Matsui, Gotoh, and Kanuka continue their
investigation; Noa and Asuma have a conversation; Ohta and Gomioka
have a conversation; Wong and Takeo have a couple conversations
Review:
It's back!!! ^_^
One of the best Patlabor fics I know, this series is the best in recent memory.
Good prose and nice dialogue make this a must read.
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[Ranma 1/2]
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Title: A Deadly Choice
Chapter: 12
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Drama, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived At: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/DeadlyChoice.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 05, 2000
Series Summary:
A demon kidnaps Ranma's fiancees one by one, with the ultimate goal of
forcing Ranma to choose which one of them he will wed... and which
three will die.
Episode Summary:
Ranma catches Ryoga in an intimate situation with Akane (again), then
goes to see Shampoo, only to find the demon already there... as well
as a surprising visitor.
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Title: A Deadly Choice
Chapter: 13
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Drama, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived At: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/DeadlyChoice.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 07, 2000
Series Summary:
A demon kidnaps Ranma's fiancees one by one, with the ultimate goal of
forcing Ranma to choose which one of them he will wed... and which
three will die.
Episode Summary:
Now that Akane is the only fiancee Ranma has left, all attentions are
on keeping her out of the demon's clutches... and everyone seems to
have their own plans.
Mass Review:
On the overall, the thing is a bit clunky. The prose and narration are smooth
but there are noticeable bumps in the road. The dialogue is like this, too.
But it's a godd piece of work, though I am a bit jaded by Ranma. Gods, I should
be screaming like crazy having to read all these Ranma fics. ^_^
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Title: Le Plus Ca Change
Chapter: Chapter 7A
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Comedy
Author: Dave Menard
Email: deibu_kun@sympatico.ca
Homepage: http://spghome.tripod.com
Date Sent to FFML: September 09, 2000
Size: 43kb
Series Summary:
The next generation of insanity hits Nerima as the offspring of the
Ranma 1/2 cast come of age
Episode Summary:
The King of Fighters tournament has begun! Who will win? Who will
lose? Who will even get around to competing? Plus, an old friend of
Kobuta's drops by, but will Ti-Pi have anything to say about it?
Review:
Really funny with the nice Dave Menard touch. Expecting more.
Highly recommended.
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[Ranma 1/2 / Battletech]
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Title: Battletech: The Saotome Gambit Part 19
Series: Ranma 1/2 - Battletech
Genre: Fusion, with a dash of LEMON in this installment.
Author: J. Austin Wilde
Email: wildeman@psn.net
Homepage: http://www.psn.net/~wildeman
Archived At: http://www.psn.net/~wildeman/TSG-19.txt
Date Sent to FFML: 8 September 2000
Size: 118K
Series Summary:
A Ranma 1/2 - Battletech fusion pitting the might of the Furinkan
Combine, the League of Five Nails, and the Jusenkyo Commonwealth
against the beleaguered Nerima Confederation. The only hope for the
Tendo family lies in the hands of two Dispossessed mechwarriors named
Saotome.
Episode Summary:
Ranma and Yuka conclude their fighter duel. In the aftermath of the
fight, Ranma quits the expedition and joins a mercenary unit due to
leave the system, while Akane relieves Genma of his
command. Elsewhere, Shampoo takes her underhanded seduction of Mousse
to the next level.
Review:
Read this. You will not regret it. Jamie Wilde is probably one of the best
writers out there on the merit of this fic alone. I wouldn't be surprised if
we see Mr. Wilde's work in a commercial release some time in the future.
So go read it!
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[Ranma 1/2 / Sailor Moon]
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Title: Souls of Fire
Chapter: #6: Shade of Gray
Series: Sailor Moon, Ranma 1/2
Genre: Continuation/Crossover
Author: Razorclaw X
Email: spiceoflife@hotmail.com
Homepage: http://www.crosswinds.net/~slythe/sm/souls.html
Date Sent to FFML: 9/7/00
Size: 80 kb
Series Summary:
Crystal Tokyo is under seige, it's population held captive on the dark
moon Nemesis. The Fenril Knights advance toward the palace,
unwavering in their conviction. The Sailor Senshi array against them
for the sake of the world they worked so hard to build.
Epsiode Summary:
Deathclaw mounts an attack on the palace, forcing Neo Queen Serenity
into a possible losing situation. Uranus and Neptune clash against
their Fenril nemesis, Sypha and Cinder, in a battle of might and wits.
Review:
See my review earlier.
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[Ranma 1/2 / Star Wars]
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Title: Ran Wars: The Fandom Menace
Series: Ranma/Star Wars
Genre: Fusion
Author: Blade and Epsilon
Email: kumonryuu@hotmail.com and tzubi@ns.sympatico.ca
Homepage: C&A Productions: http://www.crosswinds.net/~ayiekie/fanfic.htm
Date Sent to FFML: September 11th, 2000
Size: 172 kb
Summary:
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...two very strange fanfic
authors had an idea, an idea that would lead them to accomplish a feat
nobody had cared enough to accomplish before.
And now, they've done it again. Years before Ranma Skywalker was
born, in the days of the Republic, the peaceful planet of Dojo was
attacked by the photosynthesising hordes of the Gardening Union. Due
to a series of highly improbable coincidences, this conflict ended up
involving Genma, a young boy with dreams of being an ever bigger
scumbug than he was already.
His wish would be granted.
Review:
Weird and funny. That's all I'll say.
The FFML Synopses List
======================
For the week of: September 15, 2000
Moderator on Duty: Nikholas "Switch" F. Toledo
Synopses Submitted: 24 (7 for the month before and 2 for the weekend
after)
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[Neon Genesis Evangelion (Shin Seiki Evangelion)]
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Title: EVA 2055
Episode: Episode 4.0 Exodus 0:4 "Jungle/Nest Of Vipers"
Genre: Drama, Divergent Continuity
Author: Adrian Forest
Email: dalziel_86@hotmail.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/dalziel_86/fanfic.htm
Archived at http://www.geocities.com/dalziel_86/ep4.htm
Date Sent to FFML: September 4, 2000
Archive Number: 14001
Size: 47 KB
Title Summary:
The year is 2055. Forty years after Third Impact was aborted, new
events bring old friends together, and bring unfamiliar faces into the
spotlight.
Episode Summary:
A new Angel appears in the jungle of Indonesia, and Ruri is forced to
co-operate with a particularly unpleasant media agent. On assignment to
Jerusalem, Aki becomes embroiled in UN internal politics.
Review:
Well, this version has a faster pace than the other one. Could you at least
slow down? ^_^ Anyway, another problem is the fact that the characters you're
working with are still not imprinted into my head. I get confused. Try to make
them more memorable. Heck, I don't even know what they look like.
Other than that, finie piece of work. Just more polish.
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[Neon Genesis Evangelion / Xenogears]
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Title: Xenogenesis
Episode: Chapter Two
Genre: Fusion
Author: Kichigai
Email: Kichigai@tds.net
Homepage: http://come.to/Kichigai
Date Sent to FFML: September 13, 2000
Archive Number: 14283
Size: 40 KB
Title Summary:
Alien plagues have decimated the world and strange monsters follow.
Massive secret organizations vie for control of the new world, and
angels welcome people back to Eden.
Episode Summary:
Fei begins to get used to life as a Nerv pilot, now that he has an Eva
that doesn't treat him like an infection. He undergoes extensive
training to prepare him for the real enemy, the angels. Will his
training and natural skill enough to stop the monsters boring through
the geofront?
Review:
See earlier review. Though it has improved a bit.
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[No Need for Tenchi! (Tenchi Muyo!)]
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Title: Positive Outlook
Genre: Shortfic/Humor
Author: Lord Jeram
Email: jeremy@lordjeram.cjb.net
Homepage: http://www.lordjeram.cjb.net
Archived at http://www.wam.umd.edu/tenchi.txt
Date Sent to FFML: September 15, 2000
Archive Number: 14369
Size: 8 KB
Summary:
Tenchi's grandfather gives Tenchi his first challenge to become a
master: No show of negative emotions for one hour. Easy, right?
Review:
Really funny.
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[Ranma 1/2]
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Title: Adulthood of a Modern Dynasty
Episode: Chapter 4: Birth, Births, and Rebirth
Genre: Continuation
Author: Jim Lazar
Email: jimlazar@earthlink.net
Homepage: http://home.earthlink.net/~jimlazar/anime
Date Sent to FFML: September 15, 2000
Archive Number: 14378
Size: 77 KB
Title Summary:
Childhood was rough, Adulthood will break Akane and cost her dearly.
But when the fight will determine the fate of the Human Race some
sacrifices have to be made, painful as they are.
Episode Summary:
No one ever said parenthood was easy... becoming parents or being
parents.
Review:
See earlier review. Mr. Lazar is getting better and better at this. ^_^
Highly recommended.
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Title: Boar Gets Girl
Genre: Alternate Universe/Waff
Author: Small Pink Mouse
Email: mangaaddict@hotmail.com
Date Sent to FFML: September 10, 2000
Archive Number: 14195
Size: 30 KB
Summary:
Akane, being a step quicker, reveals P-chan's true identity and the
course of the Ranmaverse history is altered. This one is a failed
experiment that I'll come back to later.
Review:
The entire work is a bit clunky. Try to fix it. Also the formatting and
there are typos galore.
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Title: By the pool of the Drowned Sensei
Episode: Part One
Genre: Adventure, Alternate Universe, Drama, Serious
Author: John-Martin Lotz
Email: johnl@tomatoweb.com
Date Sent to FFML: September 16, 2000
Archive Number: 14389
Size: 9 KB
Title Summary:
A new girl enters Ranma's life, not as a fianc�e. Instead, she is like
a father to him, when she is splashed with cold water.
Episode Summary:
Kiratso Tomoe meets Ranma for the first time. She finds that the body
that she at times adopts is, in fact, Genma's.
Review:
First of all fix the formatting. It hurts my eyes. There are typos galore, so
try to read it over again. And the story in first person POV is confusing
try to shift it around to another POV for better understanding.
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Title: Ranma 1/2 -- A Deadly Choice
Genre: Drama, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived at www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/DeadlyChoice.html
Title Summary:
A demon kidnaps Ranma's fianc�es one by one, with the ultimate goal of
forcing Ranma to choose which one of them he will wed... and which three
will die.
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Episode: Chapter 15: Ranma's Plan Unfolds: I'll Defend Akane With My
Life!
Date Sent to FFML: September 11, 2000
Archive Number: 14219
Size: 25 KB
Episode Summary:
The demon is after Akane, and Ranma's plan is doomed to failure. Can he
save his last fianc�e from the clutches of the Ultimate Darkness master?
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Episode: Chapter 16: The Feuding Fianc�e Fiasco! There's Only Room For
One!
Date Sent to FFML: September 13, 2000
Archive Number: 14289
Size: 29 KB
Episode Summary:
Now that they're all in the demon's clutches, Ranma's fianc�es compete
in a deadly obstacle course race to decide which one of them is worthy
to become Ranma's bride.
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Episode: Chapter 17: A Last Desperate Attempt at Salvation
Date Sent to FFML: September 15, 2000
Archive Number: 14353
Size: 23 KB
Episode Summary:
Ranma crafts a plan to rescue his fianc�es from the demon, but the demon
has a plan of its own, and Ranma is forced to make his deadly choice.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 18: I Don't Believe It! He Chose... HER?
Date Sent to FFML: September 17, 2000
Archive Number: 14412
Size: 24 KB
Episode Summary:
Ranma has made his choice, and only one question remains... why did he
choose HER?
Mass Review:
See earlier review.
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Title: Music Medley
Genre: WAFF
Author: Small Pink Mouse
Email: mangaaddict@hotmail.com
Date Sent to FFML: September 10, 2000
Archive Number: 14194
Size: 8 KB
Summary:
After the failed wedding, Ranma attempts to reconcile with Shampoo and
is more successful than he had expected.
Review:
Weird. That's all I'll say.
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Title: Ranma Xero
Genre: Sci-fi
Author: Carrotglace
Email: Carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/misatira/
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Episodes: Part One + Prolouge
Date Sent to FFML: September 12, 2000 (in 2 posts)
Archive Numbers: 14262 and 14263
Total Size: 31 KB
Summary:
Ranma is introduced to the Tendos, yet again. This time, in a
futuristic world where Earth is at war with an alien race.
Unfortunately, he soon finds himself tied into this battle for reasons
even he doesn't completely understand. Or, more simply put, Ranma in a
Giant Robot Show. No, this isn't a fusion, either.
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Episode: Part 2: Ranma's Secret.
Genre: Sci-fi/Adventure
Date Sent to FFML: September 15, 2000
Archive Number: 14343
Size: 25 KB
Summary:
Ranma fights off an angry Akane, and something doesn't quite seem right
about him. We finally catch a glimpse of the invading forces, and
discover what the Amazons are up to as well.
Mass Review:
Well, a Carrotglace fic. You know, I always have to review one of these
at least once a week. ^_^
Anyway, the fic is up to Carrotglace's usual standards. Well-written and
very interesting. Recommended.
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Title: The Three Saotomes Parts 1 through 3
Genre: Adventure
Author: Carrotglace
Email: carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com
Dates Sent to FFML: September 12 and 13, 2000 (in 3 posts)
Archive Number: 14285, 14272, 14292
Total Size: 63 KB
Summary:
Ranma reveals a little bit of his new nature, and Akane learns an
important lesson, but at what cost? What has this got to do with the
engagement anyway?
Review:
As always another fun Carrotglace fic. You know, if you were paid for
this sort of thing Carrot, you'd probably be a millionaire by now. ^_^
Recommended for light fun reading.
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[Ranma 1/2 / Battletech]
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Title: Battletech: The Saotome Gambit Part Twenty
Genre: Fusion
Author: J. Austin Wilde
Email: wildeman@psn.net
Homepage: http://www.psn.net/~wildeman/
Archived at http://www.psn.net/~wildeman/TSG-20.txt
Date Sent to FFML: September 15, 2000
Archive Number: 14380
Size: 87 KB
Title Summary:
A Ranma 1/2 - Battletech fusion pitting the might of the Furinkan
Combine, the League of Five Nails, and the Jusenkyo Commonwealth against
the beleaguered Nerima Confederation. The only hope for the Tendo
family lies in the hands of two Dispossessed mechwarriors named Saotome.
Episode Summary:
Ukyou has an audience with Goddess-Empress Azusa, and makes a suggestion
to her that Mikado will not appreciate. Tarou escapes and cuts a deal
with Akane that will help them get the sixth crypto key. Nabiki learns
of Tetsuo Gosunkugi's arrival in the Capella System, and hurries to cut
him off before he can speak with Grand Duke Tendo. All this and Captain
Hinako Ninomiya's new pet!
Review:
See earlier review. We really should be paying for this sort of quality. ^_^
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[Ranma 1/2 / DC Universe]
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Title: Another Example of Fanfics That Should Never See The Light of
Day (With Apologies to D.B. Sommer!)
Series: Ranma, Wonder Woman
Genre: spamfic, xover
Author: Small Pink Mouse
Email: mangaaddict@hotmail.com
Date Sent to FFML: September 10, 2000
Archive Number: 14192
Size: 2 KB
Summary:
Shampoo beats out Diana for the privilege of becoming Wonder Woman.
Note:
The subject header reads "[FFML] R 1/2 Spamfic".
Review:
Weird and funny.
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[Ranma 1/2 / The Lady or the Tiger?]
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Title: Lady's Dilemma
Genre: Fusion
Author: Small Pink Mouse
Email: Mangaaddict@hotmail.com
Date Sent to FFML: September 10, 2000
Archive Number: 14191
Size: 23 KB
Summary:
Following the map that Ryouga provided lands Ranma, Akane and Shampoo
into a Frank Stockton "Lady or the Tiger?" situation.
Review:
Really funny.
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[Ranma 1/2 / The Shadow]
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Title: The Shadow of the Past
Genre: Cross-over, Pulp fiction
Author: Dave Menard
Email: deibu_kun@sympatico.ca
Homepage: http://spghome.tripod.com
Date Sent to FFML: September 12, 2000
Archive Number: 14251
Size: 35 KB
Summary:
Cologne is called to America to attend the funeral of an old ally.
Review:
I made a public review of this already. All I can say is that it is highly
recommended.
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[Ranma 1/2 Mega-Crossover]
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Title: Stallion
Episode: Chapter 9 Parts 1 through 3
Series: Ranma/SM/OMG/TM/etc.
Genre: Crossover
Author: Chas Chas
Email: chaspark@hotmail.com
Archived at http://members.nbci.com/phu_lam/
Date Sent to FFML: September 14, 2000 (in 3 posts)
Archive Numbers: 14319, 14320, 14321
Total Size: 77 KB
Title Summary:
After Jusendo, Ranma goes through some changes that worries everyone in
Nerima, although himself doesn't realize it. On the other hand, the
appearance of a mysterious power worries certain powerful individuals in
Japan. Then, suddenly, a new threat appears....
Episode Summary:
Ranma somehow ends up accompanying his cousin, much to Tenchi's dismay.
Back in the goddesses' temple, Urd gets an unexpected visit....
Review:
Realy entertaining, though it really needs a bit more polish. The narrative style is
a bit clunky and there are quite a few typos plus the format. Other than that this
is a great piece of work.
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[Revolutionary Girl Utena (Shojo Kakumei Utena)]
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Title: In the Shadow of Revolution
Episodes: Prologue and Act I:1-5
Genre: Continuation
Author: TimeRunner
Email: keiichi@i-manila.com.ph
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/thieftaker.geo
Date Sent to FFML: September 15, 2000
Archive Number: 14317
Size: 23 KB
Title Summary:
Life continues in Ohtori Academy, as Wakaba and the others live their
lives, oblivious of the fact that they now live in the shadow of a
revolution.
Episode Summary:
Wakaba has lived her life as a background character all of her life,
cast as a supporting role in the heroine's tale. But, with the Student
Council election is fast approaching, Wakaba is now cast into a new role
in her life - a role she must now play in the limelight of her own life.
Review:
Really cool and a really great read. Very recommended.
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[Ronin Warriors (Yoroiden Samurai Troopers) / SailorMoon]
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Title: Ronin Summer VI : Dark Crusade
Episode: Chapter Ten : Scattered Pieces
Genre: cross-over
Author: Morgan Hudson
Email: dataraven_659@excite.com
Homepage: http://dataraven_659.tripod.com/roninsummer.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 14, 2000
Archive Number: 14314
Size: 41 KB
Title Summary:
Seven strangers and their undead army arrive in the Dark Kingdom and
begin a holy mission of extermination, in the name of a mysterious
figure they call "Mother". Their only opposition are the Masho of the
Dynasty, but can four Yoroiden succeed alone? Of course not, but
fortunately there's help waiting in the wings...
Episode Summary:
Jun, Takenoko, Lightstorm, Thunderstorm, and Icestorm wind up battling a
number of large bugs - as well as a certain winged sibling named Vyne -
and Hotaru is sent to warn the others. The others, meanwhile, need no
warning at all, as Tytoung and his little friends have already found
them. Once more, our heroes flee, and Vyne sends both Rajura and Sailor
Saturn over a rather high cliff...
Review:
Read this. This is one of the best series ever. Also see my earlier review.
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[SailorMoon (Bishojo Senshi Sailor Moon)/ The Terminator]
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Title: Purification Day
Episode: Chapter 5
Genre: Crossover, Action, Satire
Author: Miashara
Email: s2mlmill@titan.vcu.edu
Homepage: http://www.execulink.com/~stryker
Date Sent to FFML: September 7, 2000
Archive Number: 14087
Size: 27 KB [Author says: Kinda Small]
Title Summary:
Sailor Moon vs Terminator.
Episode Summary:
A big fight scene and some more weird characters.
Go figure.
Review:
Really funny. A good fun read.
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[Samurai X (Ruroni Kenshin)]
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Title: The Fittest
Genre: Flashback
Author: Mochan
Email: mosquiton@crosswinds.net
Homepage: www.crosswinds.net/~mosquiton
Date Sent to FFML: September 4, 2000
Archive Number: 14003
Size: 9 KB
Summary:
Soujiro and Shishio meet a strange creature.
Note:
The date header of the post reads "June 7, 2000".
Review:
A great introspective read. A real cool vignette that is
really well-written. Highly recommended.
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Title: Opiate
Author: Miashara
Email: s2mlmill@titan.vcu.edu
Homepage: http://www.execulink.com/~stryker
Date Sent to FFML: September 11, 2000
Archive Number: 14222
Size: 13 KB
Summary:
Set before the series but after the OVAs. Something between stream of
consciousness and a character sketch.
Review:
Another cool Kenshin piece. Highly recommended.
The FFML Synopses List
======================
For the week of: September 22, 2000
Moderator on Duty: Sean Connor
Synopses Submitted: 27 [1 rejected]
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[Ah! Megami-sama! / Ranma 1/2]
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Title: No Need For Wishes!
Series: Ah! Megami-sama, Crossover, Ranma 1/2
Genre: Spamfic
Author: Corwin
Email: ely7@inter.net.il
Homepage: www.virtuallyjeannie.com
Archived At: http://lavender.fortunecity.com/friday/573/ranma.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 19, 2000
FFML Archive Number: 152075
Size: 6K
Summary:
Ranma is home alone, and decides to order take out. A certain goddess
answers a phone in Heaven. Two completely unrelated events... or are
they?
Review:
Funny.
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[Crossover]
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Title: One War, Three Sisters
Chapter: Chapter 6
Series: Ranma/X-Com/Starcraft
Genre: Crossover
Author: Adam Brown
Email: abrown@wwdb.org
Homepage: http://abnighthawke.homestead.com/ABNightHawkeMain.html
Archived At: http://abnighthawke.homestead.com/ABNightHawkeMain.html
Date Sent to FFML: Sept. 22, 2000
Size: 15.8k
Series Summary:
The Zerg have invaded Earth, and the Protoss have followed. With most
of the planet in ruins, only X-Com a paramilitary organization created
by the UN Security Council to combat Alien incursion can stop them.
Can Ranma and Nabiki, the newest graduates of the Ghost Program,
succeed in defeating the alien menace?
Episode Summary:
Kasumi and her Zerg entourage are back! But the Zerg want their
creatures back. And how will X-Com treat the apparently infested
woman? Also, Nabiki returns a bit worse for wear.
Review:
Really weird. But really well-written, too. Good prose and good dialogue
with a nice plot round this fic out well. Highly recommended.
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[Dragonball]
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Title: Faces In The Dawn
Series: Dragonball
Genre: Character Sketch
Author: Latin_D
Email: latin_d@uol.com.ar
Homepage: http://lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/latin_d/
Date Sent to FFML: September 18, 2000
Size: 16KB
Summary:
Gokuu returns to his home, and shares a peaceful, emotional day with
his family. Of course, it can't last, and a new fight awaits the hero.
Review:
Really cute character sketch. And that's a lot from me, since I really hate
Dragonball. ^_^
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[Evangelion]
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Title: The Fate of Hearts
Chapter: Chapter 1
Series: Evangelion
Genre: Elsetimes
Author: Joshua Trujillo
Email: gargoyle@glasscity.net
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/1509/foh.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 20, 2000
FFML Archive Number: 14527
Size: 37K
Series Summary:
Evangelion as told through the Roman Empire...Perhaps a wittier slogan
here later on...
Episode Summary:
Young Caeles Soter finds that his father sent him out in the boonies,
which is no place to be in the middle of an invasion...And what is it
with the fish too?
Second part involves backstory and is important for the overall
story...
You'll see...
Review:
A really cool Else...uh...times. Good prose and nice dialogue. Also the
idea is really fascinating. Highly recommended.
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[Macross]
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Title: FOX Squadron
Chapter: 5A
Series: Macross, ROBOTECH
Genre: Adventure
Author: G.L. Sandborn
Email: sandborn@microlink.net
Homepage: http://www.microlink.net/~sandborn
Date Sent to FFML: September 17, 2000
FFML Archive Number: 14425
Size: 60K
Series Summary:
This series takes place beteen the time the SDF-3 (along with Rick
Hunter and Lisa Hayes) has departed for the homeworld of the Robotech
Masters and the rise of the Southern Cross. The world government is
in shambles, militaristic city-states are popping up all over, and
surviving Zentraedi are on both sides. The remaining RDF forces are
all that stand between order and chaos. This is the story of one
squadron. A most unusual squadron, made up of young Lakota women,
loyal Zentraedi females, and assorted outcasts stuck in the worst
sector possible.
Episode Summary:
Colonel Stuart cleans up a few loose ends and heads for the Officers'
Club. There he meets his wife's sister who's currently a Maintenance
Officer for Skull Squadron. She introduces him to a couple more young
ladies who just might be interested in his squadron. Meanwhile,
members of FOX Squadron take in a local watering hole in an attempt to
teach the Zentraedi Ona Parino what's so special about guys. It
doesn't turn out the way they'd hoped.
Review:
Really cool fic. I love the characters already. Good prose and nice dialogue.
And a really, really sexy , almost erotic, descriptions. ^_^
Damnit, Mr. Sandborn, you sure you're getting any? ^_-
Highly recommended.
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[Magic Knight Rayearth / Ranma 1/2]
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Title: A Duet of Pigtails
Chapter: Part Eight: Meanwhile (Final Round)
Series: Ranma 1/2, Rayearth
Genre: If there was a clear answer, we'd give it to you
Author: Libby Thomas
Email: libby@yogipigs.org
Homepage: http://www.yogipigs.org/Duet/
Date Sent to FFML: September 24, 2000
Series Summary:
The further adventures of Ranma and Hikaru Saotome
Episode Summary:
The final sequence of the Japan arc (please see Part Eight:
Meanwhile.... Rounds 1 and 2 for the earlier sequences)
The newest battle for the fate of Cephiro has arrived in, of all
places, a usually quiet neighborhood of Kyoto. Facing death and utter
defeat, Kodachi, Miko, the Saotomes, and an unlikely ally must battle
demons, the Vanden Plaz, and an insane Keiei Fuitamu if they are all
to survive and remain safe!
Review:
A very, very cool fic. Go and read it or you'll miss one of the best fics
out there.
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[Pokemon]
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Title: Jellic's Hateful Quest
Chapter: 1
Series: Pokemon
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived At: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/Cover.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 20, 2000
Series Summary:
An epic fantasy hero (you know the type, defeat the Ultimate Evil, eat
breakfast, then defeat more Ultimate Evil) is thrust into the world of
Pokemon, where he can't fight his own battles any more. Instead, he
has to rely on the most hateful of weapons: creatures that many would
describe as "cute."
Episode Summary:
Jellic arrives in the Pokemon world and captures his first Pokemon
with the help of a new friend.
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Title: Jellic's Hateful Quest
Chapter: 2
Series: Pokemon
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived At: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/Cover.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 22, 2000
Series Summary:
An epic fantasy hero (you know the type, defeat the Ultimate Evil, eat
breakfast, then defeat more Ultimate Evil) is thrust into the world of
Pokemon, where he can't fight his own battles any more. Instead, he
has to rely on the most hateful of weapons: creatures that many would
describe as "cute."
Episode Summary:
Jellic seeks a source of money as he continues to learn about the
world of Pokemon.
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Title: Jellic's Hateful Quest
Chapter: 3
Series: Pokemon
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived At: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/Cover.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 24, 2000
Series Summary:
An epic fantasy hero (you know the type, defeat the Ultimate Evil, eat
breakfast, then defeat more Ultimate Evil) is thrust into the world of
Pokemon, where he can't fight his own battles any more. Instead, he
has to rely on the most hateful of weapons: creatures that many would
describe as "cute."
Episode Summary:
Jellic registers as a Pokemon trainer and fights his first Pokemon
battle.
Mass Review:
Really weird but nicely written. Read it if you want a really weird Pokemon
experience.
* * * * *
[Ranma 1/2]
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Title: A Deadly Choice
Chapter: Epilogue
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Drama, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived At: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/DeadlyChoice.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 18, 2000
Series Summary:
A demon kidnaps Ranma's fiancees one by one, with the ultimate goal of
forcing Ranma to choose which one of them he will wed... and which
three will die.
Episode Summary:
The demon is gone, and Ranma's fiancees are all safe and sound. There
is still, however, the question of what will become of the half-male,
half-female Ranma...
Review:
See earlier review.
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Title: Devil Hunter Ukyo parts 1+2
Series: R.5
Genre: Action/Comedy
Author: Carrotglace
Email: Carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage: Http://www.geocities.com/misatira/
Date Sent to FFML: 09/19/00
Summary:
A spin off of Permanent. Ukyo starts her devil hunting career. A young
girl gets her hands on a dangerous spell book, and Ukyo meets Hikaru
Gosunkugi.
Review:
Nice little spin-off from Carrotglace's Permanent. Recommended.
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Title: Gratuitous Self: Meta-meta-what?
Chapter: 15-17
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Satire
Author: TimeRunner
Email: keiichi@i-manila.com.ph
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/thieftaker.geo
Date Sent to FFML: September 19, 2000
Series Summary:
Gratuitous Self may be dead, or at least dormant, but its memory lives
on. Unfortunately, TimeRunner is going to share his ideas with us
whether we want him to or not.
Episode Summary:
TimeRunner expresses his opinions (and you're all going to listen!) on
revengefics, anime selectiveness, and cowardice in the face of
Evangelion fic fans?
Review:
Really nice, rantish type of ramble. I really love these things. Want a nice, light
read? This is the thing.
And HareTokiDoki Buta is really cool. Along with Takoyaki Man and Tonde Burin. ^_^
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Title: Kasumi 1/2
Chapter: Prologue
Series: Ranma 1/2
Author: Adrian D. Rainman
Email: raemowse@aol.com
Homepage: lwf58.tripod.com
Archived At: lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/raemowse/index.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 22, 2000
Series Summary:
Kasumi does something with someone whom she should not have. Now
comes time to pay the consequences of her actions.
Episode Summary:
Kasumi pays Dr. Tofu a visit because she thinks she is coming down
with something. As things turn out, she is pregnant. Oh, dear...
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Title: Kasumi 1/2
Chapter: One-Ranma, You Idiot!!
Series: Ranma 1/2
Author: Adrian D. Rainman
Email: raemowse@aol.com
Homepage: lwf58.tripod.com
Archived At: lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/raemowse/index.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 22, 2000
Series Summary:
Kasumi does something with someone whom she should not have. Now
comes time to pay the consequences of her actions.
Episode Summary:
Kasumi confides in Ranma her pregnancy. Why? Because he's the
father.
- - - - -
Title: Kasumi 1/2
Chapter: Two-Reckless Responsibility
Series: Ranma 1/2
Author: Adrian D. Rainman
Email: raemowse@aol.com
Homepage: lwf58.tripod.com
Archived At: lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/raemowse/index.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 22, 2000
Series Summary:
Kasumi does something with someone whom she should not have. Now
comes time to pay the consequences of her actions.
Episode Summary:
After the breaking news, Ranma prepares some tea for Kasumi to calm
her nerves. However, as he is boiling the water, Akane comes home.
Meanwhile Kasumi begins to thinks back to how everything began.
- - - - -
Title: Kasumi 1/2
Chapter: Three-Caught By Surprise
Series: Ranma 1/2
Author: Adrian D. Rainman
Email: raemowse@aol.com
Homepage: lwf58.tripod.com
Archived At: lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/raemowse/index.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 22, 2000
Series Summary:
Kasumi does something with someone whom she should not have. Now
comes time to pay the consequences of her actions.
Episode Summary:
Kasumi recalls the trip to Mariko's house while Ranma tries to deal
with Akane's (very) cutting remark.
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Title: Kasumi 1/2
Chapter: Four-And I Close My Eyes
Series: Ranma 1/2
Author: Adrian D. Rainman
Email: raemowse@aol.com
Homepage: lwf58.tripod.com
Archived At: lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/raemowse/index.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 22, 2000
Series Summary:
Kasumi does something with someone whom she should not have. Now
comes time to pay the consequences of her actions.
Episode Summary:
Still flashing back to Mariko's house, events lead up to the fateful
conception of Kasumi's baby. In the present, Ranma finally comes to a
decision was to what to do about her and the baby.
- - - - -
Title: Kasumi 1/2
Chapter: Five-Secrets No More
Series: Ranma 1/2
Author: Adrian D. Rainman
Email: raemowse@aol.com
Homepage: lwf58.tripod.com
Archived At: lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/raemowse/index.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 22, 2000
Series Summary:
Kasumi does something with someone whom she should not have. Now
comes time to pay the consequences of her actions.
Episode Summary:
All cards on the table, Ranma and Kasumi step forward with the truth.
Things do not go over well, and now Ryouga is involved.
Mass Review:
Fairly well-written. A nice read if you aren't jaded by Ranma fics yet.
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Title: Quantum Destinies
Chapter: 13 - The Cook, The Spy, The Lady, and Their Fianc�
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Alternate World
Author: Jurai Knight
Email: sthesken@earthlink.net
Archived At: http://home.earthlink.net/~sthesken/fanfics/qd.html
Date Sent to FFML: 9/20/00
Size: 134K
Series Summary:
On a parallel Earth that diverged from the standard Ranma timeline
over five hundred years ago, the Empire of Japan rules almost half the
world and has done so for almost a century. A young scientist named
Ranma Saotome, through a device of his invention, is now possessed of
the skills and memories of a martial artist version of himself.
Episode Summary:
Ranma is now engaged to three very familiar girls, and they react in
different ways to the events in the First QD Side Story "Roses and
Swords" by DB Sommer. Ranma begins training for a rematch.
Review:
A real gem. Highly recommended, this baby is the best.
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Title: Ranma Xero Part 3
Series: Ranma
Genre: Sci-fi/Action
Author: Carrotglace
Email: carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage: Http://www.geocities.com/misatira
Date Sent to FFML:09/18/00
Summary:
The first real mech battle begins.
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Title: Ranma: Xero [parts 4+5]
Series: R.5/Orig.
Genre: Sci-fi/Adventure
Author: Carrotglace
Email: Carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage: Http://www.geocities.com/misatira/
Date Sent to FFML: 09/24/00
Summary:
Shampoo continues to battle the enemy mecha, while Ranma deals with
his new life in Tokyo.
Mass Review:
See earlier review.
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Title: The Three Saotomes part 4
Series: R.5
Genre: Action/Comedy
Author: Carrotglace
Email: Carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage: Http://www.geocities.com/misatira/
Date Sent to FFML: 09/23/00
Summary:
Akane deals with her defeat, and Ranma isn't exactly helping matters;
and then there's the matter of his curse...
Review:
See earlier review.
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[Ranma 1/2 / Sailor Moon]
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Title: Souls of Fire
Chapter: #7: Broken Sword
Series: Sailor Moon, Ranma 1/2
Genre: Continuation/Crossover
Author: Razorclaw X
Email: spiceoflife@hotmail.com
Homepage: http://www.crosswinds.net/~slythe/sm/souls.html
Date Sent to FFML: 9/20/00
Size: 80 kb
Series Summary:
Crystal Tokyo is under seige, it's population held captive on the dark
moon Nemesis. The Fenril Knights advance toward the palace,
unwavering in their conviction. The Sailor Senshi array against them
for the sake of the world they worked so hard to build.
Epsiode Summary:
Ami is given the opportunity to defeat the Fenril war machine, but can
she betray her newfound friends to do it?
Review:
See earlier review.
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[Slayers]
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Title: Slayers Generations
Chapter: 1
Series: Slayers
Genre: Adventure, Continuation, Drama, Fantasy
Author: Todd Harper
Email: lina@sandwich.net
Homepage: http://lina.inverse.org
Archived At: http://www.sandwich.net/lina/gen
Date Sent to FFML: September 22, 2000
Series Summary:
An original-character story set in the Slayers universe, 34 years
after the events of the last novel "The Demon Slayers" (or after Try,
in anime reckoning)
Episode Summary:
Gani Sanbrook is a sorcerer, quickly becoming a rarity in the once
mage-filthy kingdom of Zefilia. When a dying friend requests he
undertake an adventure to a ruin, he disocvers a lot more about
himself and his friends (old and newfound) than he might expect,
setting the stage for a much larger quest to come...
Review:
A really nice fic. A very epic feel to it. With the humor in it, too. Remind
me of Stefan Gagne's work. Though the only problem is the formatting.
Highly recommended.
* * * * *
[Tenchi Muyou]
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Title: Sketches of Tenchi 7
Episode: 7: Cosmic Supernatural Threats
Series: Tenchi Muyo OAV/MnE
Genre: humorous
Author: HKMiller
Email: bert.miller@unisys.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Dojo/5058
Date Sent to FFML: 17 September 2000
Size: 18K
Title Summary:
Short, humorous episodes featuring Tenchi in even more girl trouble.
Episode Summary:
Tenchi faces challenges. Washuu faces fellow fiancees mad at her for
her plans. One of Mayuka's powers awakens. Four co-conspirators
uncover the truth about Youshou.
Review:
Really nice fic. Recommended.
* * * * *
[Utena]
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Title: In the Shadow of Revolution
Chapter: Act I:6-11
Series: Shojo Kakumei Utena
Genre: Continuation
Author: TimeRunner
Email: keiichi@i-manila.com.ph
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/thieftaker.geo
Date Sent to FFML: September 22, 2000
Series Summary:
Life continues in Ohtori Academy, as Wakaba and the others live their
lives oblivious the the fact that they now live in the shadow of a
revolution.
Episode Summary:
The Duels have begun, and the current champion is Wakaba. However,
what can Wakaba do if the End of the World has decreed through the
letters that she cannot win her next duel?
Review:
See earlier review.
* * * * *
[Yuu Yuu Hakusho]
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Title: Shonen
Chapter: Chapter 1: Seeds
Series: Yuyu Hakusho
Genre: Drama, Action
Author: Chester Casta�eda
Email: gab_ab@edsamail.com.ph
Homepage: Http://www.geocities.com/gabriel_abdiel
Date Sent to FFML: August 13, 2000
Size: 46 Kb
Series Summary:
We are all, in one way or another, broken pieces from a whole...and we
are always contantly finding that missing piece we have,to be a whole
person... to be a whole man. This is a story of such.
Episode Summary:
The aftermath of events... Kurama is faced in the task of finding out
who this new enemy is and what he is after... not even realizing that
the one he is hunting is actually the one hunting for him.
Review:
Nicely written, though fixing the formatting up a bit would add to the
polish. Recommended fro YYH fans.
The FFML Synopses List
======================
For the week of: September 29, 2000
Moderator on Duty: Nikholas "Switch" F. Toledo
Synopses Submitted: 15 (1 for weeks before and 1 for weekend after)
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[DragonBall]
* * * * *
[DragonBall / Ranma 1/2]
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Title: A Saiyan Tail Part 16: The Eternal Lost Saiyan.
Genre: Action/Comedy
Author: carrotglace
Email: carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/misatira/
Date Sent to FFML: September 27, 2000
Archive Number: 14717
Size: 18 KB
Summary:
Ranma faces off against Ryoga while his father heads towards Japan.
Unbeknownst to Goku, [but knownst to us...] Piccolo lies in wait for
him.
Review:
A nice fic, as always, from Carrotglace. That's a lot from me since
I hate DB a lot.
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[Macross]
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Title: FOX Squadron
Episode: Episode 5 - Bar Scenes, Part 2
Genre: Adventure
Author: G.L. Sandborn
Email: sandborn@microlink.net
Homepage: http://www.microlink.net/~sandborn
Date Sent to FFML: September 24, 2000
Archive Number: 14613
Size: 71 KB
Title Summary:
This series takes place between the time the SDF-3 (along with Rick
Hunter and Lisa Hayes) has departed for the homeworld of the Robotech
Masters and the rise of the Southern Cross. The world government is in
shambles, militaristic city-states are popping up all over, and
surviving Zentraedi are on both sides. The remaining RDF forces are all
that stand between order and chaos. This is the story of one squadron.
A most unusual squadron, made up of young Lakota women, loyal Zentraedi
females, and assorted outcasts stuck in the worst sector possible.
Episode Summary:
FOX Squadron gets a new Maintenance Officer; Jeff's sister-in-law.
Jeff's wife reveals the results of her 'vision quest'. She's going with
when the squadron heads for the Ozarks. Meanwhile, Ona has a run-in
with one of the new squadron members. The Fox sisters, reduced to
combing bars, find another pilot but she's not all that willing.
Review:
See earlier review.
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[Neon Genesis Evangelion]
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Title: EVA 2055
Episode: Episode 5.0 Exodus 0:5 "Lowside Rising"
Genre: Cyberpunk, Divergent Continuity, Drama-ish
Author: Adrian Forest
Email: dalziel_86@hotmail.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/dalziel_86/fanfic.htm
Archived at http://www.geocities.com/dalziel_86/ep5.txt
Date Sent to FFML: September 25, 2000
Archive Number: 14653
Size: 39 KB
Title Summary:
The year is 2055. 40 years after Third Impact was aborted, new events
bring old friends together, and bring unfamiliar faces into the
spotlight.
Episode Summary:
Shinji and Asuka's dramatic escape reveals the machinations of an unseen
power. Ruri discovers that her teenage charges may not be what they
seem.
Review:
See earlier review.
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Title: Garden of EVA Book 2: Blows
Episode: 2:7 - Something Blows!
Genre: Alternate Universe, Lime
Author: Jim Lazar
Email: jimlazar@earthlink.net
Homepage: http://home.earthlink.net/~jimlazar/anime
Date Sent to FFML: September 24, 2000
Archive Number: 14617
Size: 53 KB
Title Summary:
Take 5 minutes from episode 26 and make it into a continuing series? No
way! Can't be done! What if I put a VR Eva game in and lots of
hormone-driven teenagers talking about sex? Not enough? How about a
love triangle? Ah, now that I have your attention:
Episode Summary:
Shinji and Kaworu sitting in a tree. K... I... S... S... I... N... G...
Something big blows!!
Review:
See earlier review.
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Title: GENESIS, from the Evangelion NeoBible
Genre: Spamfic
Author: Latin_D
Email: latin_d@uol.com.ar
Homepage: http://lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/latin_d/index.html
Archived at http://lwf58.tripod.com/fan_fiction/latin_d/genesis.txt
Date Sent to FFML: September 23, 2000
Archive Number: 14595
Size: 9 KB
Summary:
Another example of a fusion from Hell: Evangelion/The Holy Bible. Gendo
is the first man... Scary, don't you think?
Review:
Weird. that's all I'll say.
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[Pocket Monsters]
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Title: Choice
Genre: Shortfic/Character Exploration
Author: Raye Johnsen
Email: raye_j@yahoo.com
Homepage: http://members.xoom.com/Raye01/
Date Sent to FFML: September 27, 2000
Archive Number: 14747
Size: 8 KB
Summary:
Pikachu considers all the choices s/he has made and why.
Review:
Nice introspective fic. I don't know how but she did a nice
character fic for Pikachu. ^_^
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Title: Jellic's Hateful Quest
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived at www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/Cover.html
Title Summary:
An epic fantasy hero (you know the type, defeat the Ultimate Evil, eat
breakfast, then defeat more Ultimate Evil) is thrust into the world of
Pokemon, where he can't fight his own battles any more. Instead, he has
to rely on the most hateful of weapons: creatures that many would
describe as "cute."
- - -
Episode: Chapter 4: The Experimental Gimme Pig
Date Sent to FFML: September 26, 2000
Archive Number: 14667
Size: 19 KB
Episode Summary:
Jellic meets Droll Vordekar, head of Karddor Labs and the most likely
source of evil in the Pokemon world.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 5: A Mime is a Terrible Thing to Waste
Date Sent to FFML: September 28, 2000
Archive Number: 14728
Size: 21 KB
Episode Summary:
Jellic catches a Caterpie, then takes on his first Badge battle.
- - -
Episode: Chapter 6: The Forest of Mist, Trees and Dangerous Pokemon
Date Sent to FFML: September 30, 2000
Archive Number: 14768
Size: 24 KB
Episode Summary:
Jellic and Ashley face the most dangerous Pokemon yet in the Forest of
Mist.
Mass Review:
See earlier review.
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[Ranma 1/2]
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Title: Clockwork
Episode: Chapter 02
Genre: Alternate Universe
Author: Tom Mathews a.k.a Disruptor
Email: mathews1@gte.net
Archived at http://home1.gte.net/mathews1/
Date Sent to FFML: September 28, 2000
Archive Number: 14741
Size: 26 KB
Title Summary:
What if Ranma fell into the spring of drowned clockwork girl?
Episode Summary:
Ranma's first day at school.
Review:
Strange idea, though the work itself is a well-written piece.
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[Ranma 1/2 / SailorMoon]
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Title: Blessed
Episode: Prologue 1: Beatitas et Lumina
Genre: Adventure, Crossover, WAFF
Author: Libby Thomas, based on a treatment by Little Michi
Email: libby@yogipigs.org
Homepage: Studio YOGIPIGS - http://www.yogipigs.org,
http://gurlpages.com/ladycrystal13/blssd.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 25, 2000
Archive Number: 14663
Size: 42 KB
Title Summary:
The life of Saotome Ranma and his second wife, the former Tsukino Usagi.
Episode Summary:
>From the breakup of the Senshi and the death of Akane, the decade of
Ranma and Usagi growing together is chronicled herein.
Review:
Okay, another fic along the lines of Duet of Pigtails. I prefer Duet of Pigtails.
The fic is well-written but it comes across as mix between Sailormoon AX
and DoP. Grea fics but the mix doesn't work for me. Anyway, it is a
compelling idea and comes across well with Ms. Thomas' writing.
Recommended reading for Libby Thomas fans.
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Title: Souls of Fire
Episode: #8: Shattered Mirror
Genre: Continuation/Crossover
Author: Razorclaw X
Email: spiceoflife@hotmail.com
Homepage: http://www.crosswinds.net/~slythe/sm/souls.html
Date Sent to FFML: September 27, 2000
Archive Number: 14695
Size: 80 KB
Title Summary:
Crystal Tokyo is under siege, its population held captive on the dark
moon Nemesis. The Fenril Knights advance toward the palace, unwavering
in their conviction. The Sailor Senshi array against them for the sake
of the world they worked so hard to build.
Episode Summary:
Ayame ponders her existence and it is up to Kodachi to bring her back
from the brink of oblivion. Mercury faces the consequences of her
betrayal.
Review:
See earlier review.
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[Ranma 1/2 Mega-Crossover]
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Title: Stallion
Series: Ranma/TM/SM/OMG/etc.
Genre: Xover
Author: Chas Chas
Email: chaspark@hotmail.com
Archived at http://members.nbci.com/phu_lam
Title Summary:
After Jusendo incident, Ranma goes through some changes that worry the
people around him. Just then, a new threat appears in town...
- - -
Episode: Chapter 9 < Calm before the storm... at least, they though it
was calm... > Parts 1 through 3
Date Sent to FFML: September 14, 2000 (in 3 posts)
Archive Numbers: 14319, 14320, 14321
Total Size: 77 KB
Episode Summary:
Ranma and Akane follow Tenchi and Co. to Okayama. On the other side of
town, the distraught Urd has a visitor...
- - -
Episode: Chapter 10 < Visiting the relatives are always fun...
I guess... > Parts 1 through 3
Date Sent to FFML: September 28, 2000 (in 3 posts)
Archive Numbers: 14742, 14744, 14745
Total Size: 71 KB
Episode Summary:
Ranma and Akane meet the more-than-unusual Masaki family members...
Mass Review:
See earlier review.
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[Vampire Princess Miyu]
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Title: Deceptions
Episode: Episode One - Friends
Genre: Dark
Author: Mike Ironoak
Email: ironoak@fsmail.net
Archived at http://www.geocities.com/alex_gray255/ffml/shima.txt
Date Sent to FFML: September 25, 2000
Archive Number: 14630
Size: 55 KB
Title Summary:
This series is based around the TV series of Vampire Princess Miyu and
brings Miyu into conflict with forces both familiar to her and those
that are not. She learns that her battles against the Shinma are simply
a reflection of a much larger and more sinister conflict.
Episode Summary:
After being "tricked" into a sleep over at her friend's house, Miyu is
knocked over by a college girl who seems to have attracted the interest
of a number of Shinma that Miyu has never seen the likes of before. She
asks Larva to keep an eye on them, unaware that she herself is being
both watched and manipulated by a shadowy figure.
Review:
A great fic, though there are a few typos and grammar mistakes. The
fic is really cool and I highly recommend it for anyone.
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The FFML Synopses List
======================
For the week of: October 6, 2000
Moderator on Duty: Sean Connor
Synopses Submitted: 21
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[Crossover]
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Title: All-Purpose Jusenkyo Girl Nuku-Nuku
Chapter: chapters 1 & 2
Series: Crossover, Nuku-Nuku, Ranma 1/2
Genre: Action, Fusion, Humour
Author: Corwin
Email: ely7@inter.net.il
Homepage: www.virtuallyjeannie.com
Archived At: http://lavender.fortunecity.com/friday/573/ranma.html, http://members.nbci.com/phu_lam/index.htm
Date Sent to FFML: October 03, 2000
FFML Archive Number: 152239, 152243
Size: 18K, 18K
Series Summary:
Once upon a time, Genma decided to teach Ranma the Neko-ken. After the
training, the boy adopted a kitten that helped him deal with his fear
of cats... Years later, the trio reach Jusenkyo, the Valley of the
Really Cursed Springs, where the real fun begins!
Episode Summary:
In the first chapter, Ranma, Genma and Nuku Nuku come to Jusenkyo, and
Nuku Nuku gets cursed to turn into an Insanely Super-Powered and Very
Beautiful Drowned Girl. After a short trip to the Amazon village to
get a few fiancees, Ranma and Co. finally get to the Tendo Dojo.
In chapter 2, Ranma and Nuku Nuku go to school. However, their Amazon
spouses won't rest until they've taken Ranma and Nuku Nuku back to
their village.
Review:
Strange idea and well-written, but it doesn't click for me. Try it if you
wish.
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Title: Wrath of Gods
Chapter: chapter 7
Series: Ah! Megami-sama, Crossover, Ranma 1/2
Genre: Adventure, Crossover, Drama
Author: Corwin
Email: ely7@inter.net.il
Homepage: http://www.virtuallyjeannie.com/
Archived At: http://lavender.fortunecity.com/friday/573/ranma.html, http://members.nbci.com/phu_lam/index.htm, http://home.earthlink.net/~tannim/rfics.html
Date Sent to FFML: October 01, 2000
FFML Archive Number: 152235
Size: 25K
Series Summary:
Ranma's been having weird dreams ever since the failed wedding... and
what do the three Norns have to do with it, anyway?
Episode Summary:
What happened to Belldandy? What is Skuld's new and brilliant plan to
take care of Ranma once and for all? All that and more is revealed in
this chapter.
Review:
Nice chapter and very good fic. Recommended for fans.
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[Kareshi Kanojo no Jijou]
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Title: Afterglow
Series: Kareshi Kanojo no Jijou
Genre: original flavor
Author: Ukyou Kuonji
Email: ukyoukwnji@aol.com
Homepage: http://members.aol.com/ukyoukwnji/index.htm
Date Sent to FFML: 9/29/2000
Size: 7K
Summary:
In the aftermath of the events of episode 18, we get a brief look
inside the minds of Yukino Miyazawa and Souchiro Arima as they each
contemplate what has happened between them and what it all means...
Review:
A really great fic on a really good series. I have KareKano's ED song
playing right now and its really cool. This fic is highly recommended along
with the anime its based on.
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[Monster Rancher]
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Title: Somewhere Out There (Music Video Adaptation)
Series: Monster Rancher
Genre: Songfic, Romance
Author: Platinum Dragon
Email: Platinum_Dragon@usinternet.com
Homepage: http://dragonsanime.com, http://pixieshrine.dragonsanime.com, http://www.usinternet.com/users/platinum_dragon
Archived At: http://pixieshrine.dragonsanime.com
Date Sent to FFML: September 29, 2000
Size: 5K
Summary:
An adaptation of the song "Somewhere Out There" from An American Tale
into a music video, with Pixie and Genki singing the parts of Linda
Ronstadt & James Ingram, respectively.
Review:
Nice piece. Very nice for a songfic.
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[Pokemon]
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Title: Jellic's Hateful Quest
Chapter: 7
Series: Pokemon
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@rose-hulman.edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived At: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/Cover.html
Date Sent to FFML: October 02, 2000
Series Summary:
An epic fantasy hero (you know the type, defeat the Ultimate Evil, eat
breakfast, then defeat more Ultimate Evil) is thrust into the world of
Pokemon, where he can't fight his own battles any more. Instead, he
has to rely on the most hateful of weapons: creatures that many would
describe as "cute."
Episode Summary:
Jellic's Mewtwo gains new power courtesy of the Cyber Stone... and
Droll Vordekar reveals the power of the Secret Machines.
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Title: Jellic's Hateful Quest
Chapter: 8
Series: Pokemon
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived At: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/Cover.html
Date Sent to FFML: October 04, 2000
Series Summary:
An epic fantasy hero (you know the type, defeat the Ultimate Evil, eat
breakfast, then defeat more Ultimate Evil) is thrust into the world of
Pokemon, where he can't fight his own battles any more. Instead, he
has to rely on the most hateful of weapons: creatures that many would
describe as "cute."
Episode Summary:
Jellic seeks medical help for Ashley and Lobia... and discovers
Ashley's true feelings for him.
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Title: Jellic's Hateful Quest
Chapter: 9
Series: Pokemon
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived At: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/Cover.html
Date Sent to FFML: October 06, 2000
Series Summary:
An epic fantasy hero (you know the type, defeat the Ultimate Evil, eat
breakfast, then defeat more Ultimate Evil) is thrust into the world of
Pokemon, where he can't fight his own battles any more. Instead, he
has to rely on the most hateful of weapons: creatures that many would
describe as "cute."
Episode Summary:
Jellic defends Maroon Town from the Pokemon League Enforcers... making
a new set of enemies.
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Title: Jellic's Hateful Quest
Chapter: 10
Series: Pokemon
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy
Author: Nidoking
Email: Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu
Homepage: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp
Archived At: www.rose-hulman.edu/~katinamp/Cover.html
Date Sent to FFML: October 08, 2000
Series Summary:
An epic fantasy hero (you know the type, defeat the Ultimate Evil, eat
breakfast, then defeat more Ultimate Evil) is thrust into the world of
Pokemon, where he can't fight his own battles any more. Instead, he
has to rely on the most hateful of weapons: creatures that many would
describe as "cute."
Episode Summary:
While fording the Swamp of Sickness, Jellic relives his fight with the
swamp dragon Miresbane, while a pesky Ekans continually attacks him
and Ashley in the present.
Mass Review:
See earlier review.
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[Ranma 1/2]
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Title: A Kiss to the Victor
Chapter: Chapter 5
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Romance, comedy
Author: David (Fido) Lindquist, June (Karaohki) Geraci
Email: fido@rma.edu , karaohki@snet.net
Homepage: www.fortunecity.com/victorian/rothko/228/kiss.htm
Date Sent to FFML:Oct 1, 2000
Size: 40k
Summary/Series Summary:
An alternate history in which Ranma and Akane had kissed during the
Romeo and Juliet play.
Episode Summary:
Repercussions from what happened in the locker room cause trouble for
both Ranma and Akane. Kodachi Kuno issuing a challenge to Akane. And
one other problem... Nabiki knows.
Review:
Really nice fic. Very well written, along with ood dialogue. Very recommended.
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Title: Ranma: Xero Part 7
Series: Ranma/Original
Genre: Sci fi
Author: Carrotglace
Email: Carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/misatira
Date Sent to FFML: 10/05/00
Size: 24 kb
Summary:
The battle in Tokyo heats up as Kodachi and Akane face off against
Siore. Unfortunately Soun and his men have other concerns as well.
Review:
See earlier review.
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Title: Temptress Prologue
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Alternate Universe
Author: D.B. Sommer
Email: sommer@3rdm.net
Homepage: http://angcobra.jumpfun.com/dbsommer.html
Date Sent to FFML: 10/1/00
Size: 10kb
Summary:
This time around, Ukyou has a different reaction to Ranma leaving her.
Review:
A really fascinating idea. Plus with the D.B. Sommer touch, this is going
to be really great.
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Title: The Three Saotomes Part 5
Series: Ranma
Genre: Action adventure
Author: Carrotglace
Email: carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage: Http://www.geocities.com/misatira/
Date Sent to FFML: 10/04/00
Size: 20kb
Summary:
Genryu gets a challenger at last, but things start to surface from the
Saotomes past that could prove dangerous to them and everything around
them.
Review:
See eralier review.
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Title: Two Types of Liars
Chapter: 1-4 plus a side story.
Series: Ranma
Genre: Humor/Lemon/Alt uni
Author: Kichigai
Email: Kichigai@tds.net
Homepage: http://come.to/Kichigai
Date Sent to FFML:10/01/00
Series Summary:
Ranma, Genma, and Ryoga fall into these really weird springs in China.
They turn into whatever drowned there last, but the only way they can
turn back to normal is to experience an orgasm, any way possible.
Well what do you know, a lemon series where no one gets any.
Episode Summary:
Variously, Ranma gets cursed and Genma-chan is falsly accused of
sodomy. Next, Akane is a pervert and Kasumi isn't very nice. Then,
Ryoga the baby tentacle demon shows up. A side story involving
Akane's sordid past. Lastly, Akari and eldritch perversion.
Review:
Weird, crazy and really funny.
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[Ranma 1/2 / Battletech]
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Title: Battletech: The Saotome Gambit Part 21
Series: Ranma 1/2 - Battletech
Genre: Fusion
Author: J. Austin Wilde
Email: wildeman@gci-net.com
Homepage: http://www.gci-net.com/users/w/wildeman/
Archived At: http://www.gci-net.com/users/w/wildeman/TSG-21.txt
Date Sent to FFML: 3 October 2000
Size: 123K
Series Summary:
A fusion of Ranma 1/2 and Battletech pitting the Tendo Family of the
Nerima Confederation against the dreaded Furinkan Combine and the the
League of Five Nails. The only chance the Tendos have lies in the
hands of two Dispossessed mechwarriors named Saotome.
Episode Summary:
Nabiki's secret meeting with Tetsuo Gosunkugi ends in disaster as
elsewhere, Ranma, Akane, and the rest of the Ryuugenzawa Expedition
get caught up in the wedding of Mikado Sanzenin and Goddess-Empress
Azusa Shiratori - while pulling off the heist that will secure the
sixth and final decryption key.
Review:
See earlier review.
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[Ranma 1/2 / Sailor Moon]
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Title: Souls of Fire
Chapter: #9: Death Sphere
Series: Sailor Moon, Ranma 1/2
Genre: Continuation/Crossover
Author: Razorclaw X
Email: spiceoflife@hotmail.com
Homepage: http://www.crosswinds.net/~slythe/sm/souls.html
Date Sent to FFML: 10/4/00
Size: 80 kb
Series Summary:
Crystal Tokyo is under seige, it's population held captive on the dark
moon Nemesis. The Fenril Knights advance toward the palace,
unwavering in their conviction. The Sailor Senshi array against them
for the sake of the world they worked so hard to build.
Epsiode Summary:
Sailor Moon decides it is time to deal with the Shadow Weaver, Hokuto,
before she can get out of hand. Kanna issues her ultimatum to the
world parliament and King Endymion. Both sides gather their resources
from the previous battle, preparing for the inevitable final battle.
Review:
See eralier review.
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[Revolutionary Girl Utena]
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Title: In the Shadow of Revolution
Chapter: Act I:6-11
Series: Shojo Kakumei Utena
Genre: Continuation
Author: TimeRunner
Email: keiichi@i-manila.com.ph
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/thieftaker.geo
Date Sent to FFML: September 29, 2000
Series Summary:
Life continues in Ohtori Academy, as Wakaba and the others live their
lives oblivious the the fact that they now live in the shadow of a
revolution.
Episode Summary:
Wakaba has seemingly destroyed the plans of the End of the World, and
now a lull has descended on Ohtori Academy. How long can it last?
Review:
See earlier review.
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[Sailor Moon / Yoroiden Samurai Troopers]
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Title: Ronin Summer : Dark Crusade
Chapter: 11 - Safekeeping
Series: Sailor Moon / Yoroiden Samurai Troopers
Genre: cross-over
Author: Morgan Hudson
Email: dataraven_659@excite.com
Homepage: http://dataraven_659.tripod.com/roninsummer.html
Date Sent to FFML: October 6, 2000
Size: 39 KB
Series Summary:
Seven strangers and their undead army arrive in the Dark Kingdom and
begin a holy mission of extermination, in the name of a mysterious
figure they call "Mother". Their only opposition are the Masho of the
Dynasty, but can four Yoroiden succeed alone? Of course not, but
fortunately there's help waiting in the wings...
Episode Summary:
Vyne learns that his impromptu attack earlier that night may have been
a bad idea, and flies back to the accident scene, sister Holts in
tow. Too late, however, as Rajura and Hotaru have both managed to
escape and set forth in search of their comrades. A thunderstorm
forces the pair to take refuge in the Keep, where Rajura believes
Kayura, Anubis and Sailor Pluto should soon arrive.
Review:
See earlier review.
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[Slayers]
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Title: Beasts Soothe The Savage Music
Series: Slayers
Genre: Spamfic
Author: Adrian Tymes
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Date Sent to FFML: October 06, 2000
Size: 6.07 KB
Summary:
Music fashions come and go, but some powers of music are primal and
eternal.
Review:
Really funny.
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Title: The Slayers: Reward Chapter 6 - Danger! Do Not Enter!
Series: The Slayers
Genre: Continuation
Author: Lord Archive
Email: archive@mich.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Fuji/9061/anime.html
Date Sent to FFML: 9-30
Size: 21K
Summary:
Lina and crew enter the mansion that was supposed to be a quick and
easy job. After all how many rooms can a two-story mansion have?
Review:
Really funny fic. I heartily recommend this fic.
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[Teknoman]
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Title: Shara's Last Gift
Chapter: Chapter 5: Enemy Beloved
Series: Teknoman
Genre: Continuation, Continuation, xover
Author: Teknos Warhammer/Christian Clark
Email: Teknosw@hotmail.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Teknos.geo
Date Sent to FFML: October 02, 2000
Size: 65K
Series Summary:
Continuing where the series left off; Earth's chances against the
alien warlord, Darkon, have taken a turn for the better with the
acquisition of information from a dying Shara Carter... yet, even with
her help, will it be enough?
Episode Summary:
At the start of a beautiful day, the events brewing are anything
but. For reasons of keeping their newfound warrior secret, the
Commander sends Tina, Slade, and Shara to the north to lay low.
While, back at the homefront, Darkon's continually haunted by dreams
of doom as that shadow of his past gets closer to reaching him.
Finally, in a bold move, Teknoman Sword, utilizes Star Summers for the
purpose of killing our hero!
Review:
Really nice fic. Don't let the Teknoman in the subject line make you
afraid, this is a really good fic. Hihly recommended.
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[Tenchi Muyou]
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Title: A Certain Talk
Series: Tenchi Muyou!
Genre: Spamfic
Author: Adrian Tymes
Email: wingcat@pacbell.net
Date Sent to FFML: October 01, 2000
Size: 9.43 KB
Summary:
Some children have more to worry about than the birds and the bees.
Review:
Really funny.
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Sorry about the delay. As everyone wth CNN knows, my country is going to
hell in a very large handbasket. ^_^
Anyway, for the Filipinos and Filipinas on the list there are two conventions
coming up that I will try to attend. The first one is the gaming convention
that's going to go down at Ateneo. Gawd, I finally get to enter that place. ^_-
The other one is the Megamall anime convention, where I'll try to get my
Yuu Watase collection signed, but since the one hundred fifty pesos( three
dollars in American terms) is pretty steep after all my recent purchases(
Jigoku Sensei Nube vol. 1 - 39 and the Nocturne collection), I may not
attend. Jeez, one hundred fifty pesos is a day's wage. ^_^ Anyway, if I do
attend I'll be the old-looking lady with combat boots and glasses. So move
away if you see me. ^_^ If I'm lucky I'll be going as Haruka. ^_^
Well, after fixing everything that's still pending I'm taking a rest. Ja mata!