Hmmm, a few spelling errors, or at least words that looked like they might
have a few letters out of place. Spelling's not my best subject so I'll leave
that to others.
Also, in place of what I guess were supposed to be ellipses, I got a funny
symbol instead. It might be AOL though.
Other then that, the plot looks interesting, and I am definitly looking
forward to more.
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Agreeable Komodo
He who bought it, supplied it.
Just say yes to prophylactics.
"Wait a minute! You can't be a horse! If you're a horse, how come you can
talk?"
"I can't, the horse next to me is a ventriloquist."
"Ventriloquist-How can a horse be a ventriloquist?"
"How should I know, it's your dream."
-The Jack Benny Show