Kenji Miyazawa wrote:
My apologies, everyone. This damn computer sent the message before I even
got to put the script up. Let's try this again... As a reminder, I want you
to decide which is better. The second one is more suited to the characters,
but I want to know what you guys think.
The second one is, IMO, more suited period. Main points: it leaves
less confusion* (for instance, it explains why the master can only train
one if tradition is that he can only train two) and has better
characterization.
* There's good and bad ways to confuse the reader; I'm only talking
about the bad side here.