Tymes-san
This one has enough potential to develop it into a much longer
story. Although the one point I don't understand is why Usagi and
Minako couldn't share the parents. This thought offers some story
possibilities. Such as convincing Kenji and Ikuko to adopt Minako.
Or them at some point remembering the truth.
I also must ask the question, What about Usagi's real family. Who
were they? And did the crystal do other things too? Like take away
Mako-chan's family so that she would be more protective of Usagi;
so that she would be tougher; so that Usagi would be more protective
of her; etc?
Come back to this one and run with it.
KT out
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"Sometimes we must do things, not because they are the right things
to do, or the easiest things to do, or the ones that will bring us
rewards. Sometimes, we must do things because they must be done."
-- "Waters Under Earth" by Alan Harnum