Hi,

Based on C&C from Thryth (thank you!) I made some changes in the scene by
the bridge with Akane and Ranma in Chapter 1. Only a paragraph or two
changed, and I didn't want to repost the whole thing here for that (yet),
but if you want to see the new version of Chapter 1 it's at Steve's web
site:

http://www.zebra.net/~spardue/anime/

It was a good suggestion, and I think the scene is more intense as a result.

Deborah



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