I really like the idea behind this story, and the original backhistory with Takahashi-sama was a hoot. I have only one complaint.
Longer chapters, by god! We need longer chapters! Either that, or send more chapters more often. I was just getting into the story when -poof-! It was over. Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!!!
I know, I know. I've been in a creative rut these last few months, and it's been a struggle to crank out what I have done. I go on vacation next week, and when I return I'll be refreshed and able to put more substance into this thing. I haven't been too thrilled with the writing style so far, it's been a strain to write this in third-person, dialogue driven style. I'll probably switch to a rotating first-person style with the next chapters.
One reason the content is so short, is because I'd rather put this out on a fairly frequent basis, rather than go *years* inbetween chapters ( cough Long And Winding Road cough)
Next up: Nabiki and Mousse make their debuts, plus the fates of Akane and Ryoga are revealed
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