I actually agree with sofaspud@sofaspud.org

Most of the things that other C&C mentioned were not things about things that 
were wrong, but difference in creativity.  I think Vince did a good job with 
the story and he brought his own style and creativity to the story as well.  
Just because person doesn't like subtle joke doesn't mean that the auther 
should just change it to in your face style.  Keep it the way it is.  I 
enjoyed it very much.  


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