| Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][BGC2040][Rewrite]Seven Days <.Third Day> |
| From: Kyhdin@aol.com |
| Date: 6/17/2000, 10:38 AM |
| To: rgorman@telusplanet.net, ffml@fanfic.com |
In a message dated 6/16/00 12:13:52 PM, rgorman@telusplanet.net writes:
I still have a problem with Sylia revealing her secrets to Kit so easily. A slower build-up and more indications that she's researched his background, or at least asked him a few questions on his opinion of vigilantism and boomers might help.
Agreed. But even Sylia isn't sure why she did it. There's no reason that she can name, there's just something about him. . . -Agreeable Komodo Just Say Yes To Prophylactics-- .---Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List---. | Administrators - ffml-admins@fanfic.com | | Unsubscribing - ffml-request@fanfic.com | | Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject | `---http://www.fanfic.com/FFML-FAQ.txt ---'