Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][BGC2040][Rewrite]Seven Days <.Third Day>
From: Kyhdin@aol.com
Date: 6/17/2000, 10:38 AM
To: rgorman@telusplanet.net, ffml@fanfic.com

In a message dated 6/16/00 12:13:52 PM, rgorman@telusplanet.net writes:

I still have a problem with Sylia revealing her secrets to Kit so 
easily.  A slower build-up and more indications that she's researched 
his background, or at least asked him a few questions on his opinion of
vigilantism and boomers might help.  

Agreed. But even Sylia isn't sure why she did it.  There's no reason that she 
can name, there's just something about him. . .

-Agreeable Komodo

Just Say Yes To Prophylactics


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