That was pretty good. And you're right, the subtext of magical swords & wings
are very connotative. But I don't know about Mokona looking like he's constantly
constipated. He looks more like he's been smoking some weeds during the breaks.

The only thing I'd change is let Fuu move around a bit. Give her some physical
movements to her emotions, otherwise, you've just got a soliquoy for the most
part.

---Andrew




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