E.L. Toh wrote:
The Gods Within
Part 2: Visiting Aliens to Immigration
by Scriviner <ebon@i-manila.com.ph>
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Shinji approximates to Superman. Asuka to the Flash. And Scriv hints
that Rei is something like Wonder Gir^H^H^H Woman. Except triplets or
something.
It's actually weirder than that, but the next part should help
explain. A little. Heh. You don't expect me to give this stuff
away, do you?
In this part, Asuka learns more about the extent of her
powers through explanations from Ritsuko (nice link is drawn to the
AT Field concept)
Thank you!
and through accidental practice. Shinji tries his
best to make Asuka feel welcome.
A gripe. The first scene was particularly unclear.
That's intentional. ;)
Kaji seems to
talking to Ritsuko and The Doctor (Ikari?). Kaji and Ritsuko are
married but there seems to be some sort of partner sharing thing
going on here. Is this reading correct?
Heh. Interesting way to read that portion. Not quite, but I will
say unequivocably, that while there's some... ahem... adultery going
on, it's not Ikari and Akagi doing that sharing. They're an exclusive
relationship.
An observation. Interesting
point about the powers not being related to the comic books but
helping Shinji to orientate his powers. Does this theme have a major
role to play in plot development later?
Yes. Further, the respondent sayeth not.
All in all, this fic looks
like fun and holds great promise. Can't wait to see Rei introduced.
<We love you, Rei!>
She's in Part 3.
Thanks for the comments and keep on reading. ^_^
-Scriv
