Subject: [FFML] [AMG]More Human Than Human part 2 [Draft]
From: James Chu
Date: 5/13/2000, 3:29 PM
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This is the draft copy of part 2.  Comments, criticism, suggestions are all
welcomed and encouraged.  Public or private is fine with me.

James

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More Human Than Human

Part 2

by JJC

---
Oh!  My Goddess! is property of Kosuke Fujishima.  This work is a piece 
of fiction intended for personal use.  No commercial use of this piece 
is intended or allowed.
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Keiichi finished putting on a clean pair of jeans and a clean T-shirt.  
The candles and fancy silverware were bugging him somewhat.  What was 
the occasion?  Why weren't there more than two sets of place setting 
out on the table?  

He put his slippers on and walked back down to the tea room.  

*That's funny.  the door's closed again.*

Keiichi knocked on the door. 

"Come on in, Keiichi-san!" came Belldandy's voice through the door.

Keiichi slid the door open.

His jaw dropped.

Belldandy was wearing a little black dress that hugged her body in just 
the right places.  It was nothing like the normal frilly, long dresses 
that Belldandy usually liked wearing.  

Keiichi's nose started to itch as his eyes wandered from Belldandy's 
smiling face down the rest of her body.  He always knew, in a detached 
manner, how beautiful she was physically, but never really paid that 
much attention to that -- her wonderful personality and the aura of 
sanctity that Belldandy seemed to exude had always kept his mind from 
wandering further.  He had always thought of Urd as the one who was the 
most physically mature of the three sisters, but right now, he wasn't 
so sure anymore.  

Keiichi quickly snapped his gaze back at Belldandy's face to keep his 
nose from hemorrhaging blood.  He looked closely at Belldandy's face to 
make sure that she wasn't under some wayward spell or enchantment.  

"Oh, Keiichi, are you okay?" said Belldandy as she stood up and moved 
toward him to feel his forehead.

Keiichi relaxed visibly.  This was definitely the Belldandy that he 
knew and loved.  His subconscious started to scream warnings at him 
that something was amiss, but his latent libido quickly silenced 
subconscious with judicious use of a sledgehammer.  

"Don't worry Bell-chan!  I'm, uh, fine.  It was just a long day of hard 
work." Keiichi stammered.  

"Hmm.  Let's see if we can make it a long night of working hard then," 
chuckled Belldandy behind a raised hand.

Keiichi stood stone still and blinked at that comment.  A full blown 
blush was now turning his face cherry red.

"Ah, Bell-chan, can you, uh, repeat that again?"

Belldandy gave Keiichi a very mischievous smile that quickly turned 
into the grin that always graced his dreams.  

"We need to speak about some very important things, Keiichi-san.  There 
are some issues that need to be dealt with tonight.  Now, let's eat, 
alright?"

Keiichi nodded absently at this.  His brain was still on a happiness 
high from the smile she had given him.  He always lost it whenever she 
smiled like that.  Belldandy gently guided him toward his cushion and 
place setting. 

Keiichi noted that her flawless fingers felt smooth and warm wrapped 
about his arm.  It sent electric shocks through his body.  He woke up 
from his reverie and sat down at his place.  

Something was different about all the food.  It hit Keiichi like a two 
ton anvil.  Normally, Belldandy's food was superb but presented in a 
simple manner -- a very eye pleasing simplicity.  This dinner was not 
just food for the body, but for the eyes as well.  Royalty would have 
weeped in thanks for this feast.  Keiichi thought it would be almost 
sacrilegious to eat such a meal.  

At Belldandy's urging, Keiichi started eating.  It almost shamed 
Belldandy's other meals.  There was no way he could compare the quality 
of this food.  This was not just merely a touch of the divine, it was 
truly heavenly manna.  

He was midway through his second serving of thinly sliced yellowfin 
carpachio, when Belldandy asked him a question.

"Where do you want to go with me, Keiichi-san?"

Keiichi glanced up quickly and spoke around a mouthful of food.

"Uh, maybe Rome, or Hawaii."

Belldandy gently clarified her question.

"No, silly.  Not _where_ do you want to go physically.  Where do you 
want our relationship to go?"

Keiichi looked somewhat bashful.  

"I don't know.  I never had any girlfriends before, and, uh, Tamiya and 
Ootaki aren't really the best advisors for my love life.  I'm not 
exactly an accomplished romantic."

Belldandy closed her eyes for a second.  When she opened them, they had 
a sparkle to them that Keiichi was instantly mesmerized by.

"Well, do you mind if I do some 'navigation' for our relationship, 
Keiichi-san?"

"Uh.  L-l-like what?" Keiichi stammered.

"Like this."  

Belldandy came around the table and glomped onto Keiichi's side 
tightly, nuzzling Keiichi's chest with her head.  Keiichi froze up like 
a deer in headlights.  His mind was in a state of total anarchy, his 
eyes were shut tight, he couldn't trust his view of reality at the 
moment.  The smell of her hair and body, a potent perfume in itself, 
enticed him.  Her embrace, although tight, felt so good, it was like he 
was an extension of her body.

He wanted to say something, but no words came to his mouth.  He wasn't 
so sure that he would be able to utter anything intelligible at the 
moment, his verbal abilities, everything down to the instinctual level, 
had shorted out.  

His physical instincts took over.  He drew her head up and started 
kissing her soft silky hair.  He then moved slowly around her head, 
softly caressing her ears with his lips, toying for a moment with her 
earrings.  He then moved on to her lips.  This was something he had 
only dreamed about before.  He kept his eyes shut, he was afraid that 
this was truly a dream and that he would wake up.  They kept their 
embrace for what seemed like a wondrous eternity.  Their hands shifted 
to more comfortable positions.  He lost all control over his body, he 
had no idea where his hands were, what his arms were wrapped about, but 
he didn't care -- he was in ecstasy, and that was what counted.  

Suddenly their balance shifted as Belldandy slid onto Keiichi's lap.  
They leaned onto the table.  Neither of them cared very much as miso 
soup and rice got onto them.  They did, however, stop for air. 
 
Belldandy suddenly realized the immediate situation.

"Keiichi-san, you've got soup all over your shirt and pants!  Let me 
help you with them."

Keiichi took off his shirt and handed it to Belldandy.  He smiled at 
her as she handed him a hot, wet napkin to him to wipe the soup 
off his chest.  

As he unbuttoned the top button on his jeans, something landed in the 
ruins of the dinner on the table.  

"Whoa!  Whoa!  Time to cool down kiddies!"  Mini-Urd frantically yelled 
as she climbed out of a casserole with tomato sauce dripping from her 
hair and clothes.  "I'm glad to see you're getting to first base, but I 
don't advise trying to get a grand slam right now."

Both Keiichi and Belldandy lowered their heads, blushing furiously.  

Mini-Urd whipped her hand up in the air and instantly cleaned herself 
up.  She then took a stance in front of the two with her arms akimbo.  

"Keiichi, get yourself cleaned up.  I, uh, want to talk to my sister 
alone."

Keiichi got up.  

"Um, uh.  Er.  Belldandy, I'll get a fresh change of clothing.  I'll 
put the rest of my clothing in the bathroom hamper."

Keiichi tried to back out of the room slowly, and fell out into the 
hallway when he realized that his legs weren't quite back in full gear.  
He then sprinted on all fours toward his room.

Belldandy sat on a mat, looking at mini-Urd with apologetic eyes.  Urd 
quickly coalesced into her full sized form.  

"I'm so, so, so sorry Onee-sama.  I just really wanted to get everything moving 
before something else comes up and interrupts us."

Urd sat down, cross-legged.  She flashed a lopsided grin at Belldandy 
and laughed.

"Don't apologize, little sis.  I just didn't want anything to happen before I could 
give you some real good pointers for tonight!"

---

Skuld wondered what all the laughing was about.  She assumed it was 
the normal lunacy that pervaded the temple and continued with her 
soldering.

---

end part 2

to be continued...




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