Subject: [FFML] Re: [FFML][Ranma][C&C]Martial Arts Marriage Ceremony 11
From: Ronny Hedin
Date: 4/15/2000, 10:48 AM
To: Michelle Thatcher
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

     Rubbing her eyes, she yawned, then glared at the clock on
her night stand.  How could she feel good about a wedding she had
to get up this early for?  And hadn't Ranma said something about
a need for secrecy and battle plans and something about wanting
to paint her toenails?

     No, that last part was probably part of the dream.

*laugh*

     What *had* he said?  And why did she have to set her alarm
to go off so early?  Something about sashimi?

     Umm... No.  Probably also part of the dream.

     So what had been real?


Heh. Nice beginning of a scene, all in all.

     ...she'd agreed to marry him.  today.  that part had been
real too.

     _oh, my._

Missinga few caps here, and if it's intentional, it's rather silly.

     Perhaps ...  Perhaps the best thing for her to do would be
to tell him that she'd changed her mind.  He might be a little
disappointed, but...

Right. "A little disappointed." ^_^

Ouch.
 
     "It's Gosunkugi, sir."

"sir" sounds a bit odd.
 
Tell me, Koduredu-kun -"

     "Gosunkugi."

The repeated name failures are growing more silly than amusing, really.
 
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Well. That was... Brief. ^_^

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                 "How embarrassing to be human." -Kurt Vonnegut



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