--- "D.F. Roeder" <dfroeder@flash.net> wrote:
This is just a scene worked two different ways of a
what-if scenario
where Ranma is Tuxedo Kamen. Just for grins. :) My
apologies if
I've duplicated someone else's humor or scene; I'm
not well-versed
in Sailor Moon fanfiction.
Ahh, Mr. Roeder? I DO write a fanfic series on
that concept, though it's been taking forever and
nobody probably remembers it. Anyway, if one compares
the original manga and VIZ translation, one realizes
that Ranma's so-called "trash-talk" is overly
exaggerated in the latter. In the manga, Ranma does
talk rough, but not to the extent in this fic, or many
other fic for that manner: I haven't read him making
a grammar mistake for Japanese equivalent of double
negatives, for example. And he CAN smooth-talk if he
wants to; listen to him try to charm Tsubasa, it's
corny enough to make Tuxy sound normal.
I'm not saying that the manga is the only valid
resource, I'm just saying that there are more than two
possibilities for the situation in your fic. Maybe
this sounded like a rant, sorry if it did.
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