Ryoga P Hibiki wrote:

        This project was an experement in my own personal writing skills; Can I
take a normal relatively unimaginative plot, and make it good? I think it
was pretty successful myself.

Well, it's not that it's badly written, but honestly I just don't much care about 
what happens.  Given the way he beat Ryoga, it isn't at all plausible that Akane
will get good enough to beat him, and nothing is really at stake, so what's the 
point?  It's just people hitting each other.




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