<CUTE>
Nabiki: (looks into the room) Ooo....mind if I get
the info on why Ranma has
4 girls in his room...in the nighttime?
##I'd change "info" to "pictures of"
and "4" to "four"
<SNIP>
Nabiki: Hmmmm...I could spread a big fat rumor
tommorrow...for a fat sum.
(runs away)
##And you might change this a bit. IMO it's too
general. A more specific money maker. For instance::
"Ranma, I can get you out of this for only 300 Yen"
<SNIP>
##A very nice shortfic. (or songfic I'm never sure
which is whic. ^_^)
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"When I get a little money, I buy books;
And, if any is left, I buy food and clothes."-Erasmus
"A man is a small thing, and the night is large
and full of wonders." -Lord Dunsany
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