Subject: [FFML] Re: [NGE][fic] Role-Playing
From: Jason Bates
Date: 12/20/1999, 11:48 PM
To: lara@emunix.emich.edu, roy.fokker@unspacy.org, Fanfic Mailing List <ffml@fanfic.com>

Interesting.  On the whole, very good.  A few areas seem to slip a little
out of character a bit with Gendo and Fuyutsuki, sorry, but I can't see
Gendo laughing load enough for anyone but Fuyutsuki to hear even during the
penguin scene.  Beyond that, it was incredible ... especially managing to
stay in character even when the characters themselves weren't. :)  And the
bit at the end was priceless, although I tend to see it as a little dues ex
machina (even though an Asuka plot is more than believable as well). :)



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