Lucres Annuiteas wrote:
That comma should probably be a question mark.
Repaired. ^_^
That sentence seems a little awkward. Maybe you should
just take out the 'at least'.
Noted, and fixed. ^_^
gonan-->gonna
*Beats his head on the wall*
ARG! I coulda SWORE I had the spellcheck done... *sigh*
Guess not. Oh well, I'll run the spellchecker through right away, before I
post to the RAAC.
Take out one of those 'the's
Yeah, repetition is one of the major problems I have. ^_^ Spellcheck
usually picks 'em up, though.
*continues to beat his head on the wall*
Definitely
Noted, and fixed.
"And take that stuff off. You look ridiculous!" he
added. "Besides, I can see the seam!"
Hehe. :)
Yeah, I thought that was pretty good too. ^_^
:)
Well put. ^_^
Yeah! Let's see some action!
And action you saw.
Truthfully, I've never seen Ranma get sacked in the... umm... nether
regions in a fic before. Maybe I'm looking at the wrong fic, but come on!
Be reasonable! He DOES have 'em! (In male form anyway). I mean, just read a
lemon!
But I've never seen him get sacked.
People, as a public plea, write more fics where Ranma gets sacked!
*Goes to watch 'Man gets hit in the groin with a football*
jsut-->just
Bot, an my widout me spellchequer. Sheash.
'A crowd was beginning to grow.' will do just fine
here.
Yeah, I reread that and was like.... HUH? ^_^
Aizen: Hooked on Phonics works for me!
At least she wasn't hooked on ponics. THEN we'd have a problem.
Heh. Wait until you see the last chapter, I've got something big planned
for that one. ^_^
This is kind of disappointing. I was hoping for
something more creative, but what can you do?
Ahh, it gets creative!
I take that back. This is good enough for me.
See? I admit, it's a bit of a rip-off, but this is Aizen we're talking
about. ^_^
grown-->groan
... I can't believe I never saw that.... GOD!
That seems like a pretty unreasonable exclamation, but
I guess he's still out of it.
Well, that and the fact that Akane just called him Takao, so he
automatically assumed he was still a guy. ^_^
I dunno. I kind of liked it.
And I appreciate that. ^_^
Wait, are you dumping everything then? I thought
everything was stable, and I'm eager to see the next
chapter.
Ooh, definitely not. I'm not dumping a single thing. I'm still gonna write,
but I won't be online, so I'll be posting through my hotmail account, or a
liaison of sorts. ^_^
ttyl,
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[So we'll go no more a roving
So late into the night,
Though the heart be still as loving,
And the moon be still as bright.
For the sword outwears its sheath,
And the soul wears out the breast,
And the heart must pause to breathe,
And Love itself have rest.
Though the night was made for loving,
And the day returns too soon,
Yet we'll go no more a roving
By the light of the moon.]
Lord Byron - So we'll go no more a'roving