On Wed, 1 Dec 1999, Chan Wei Lik wrote:

You almost had me going there, now pony up the text.

Yeah! Chpater 4 AND the Epilouge both feel bogus. If they're for real, you
really need help.
And make up your mind as to what you want to call Akane and stick to it.

Ack, I didn't mean it like that. How mean. :( The story flow just seems
forced and overly contrived in the epilogue, and I really appreciated the
story, but didn't think it fit in.

Minty.



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