C&C please. First post.
-Prologue: Final Fantasy Fan Fic-
The group of bandits looked around the small town on the top of a very
high cliff, which was over looking the whole town. One of the bandits
who seemed like the leader spoke up.
"This is the right one. We will go in tonight."
That night...
The group of bandits, a notorious band of thieves and murderers, rode
on their chocobo's down to the small town. The bandits killed anyone
who were in their way and made their way to the bank. The old bank
owner stepped in front of the vault.
"He..hey! You can't take this... this is the treasure vault of the
town... it contains valuable items and antiques!" The bandits only cut
down the man cold blooded.
"Boss... this vault is locked." The leader waved him off, annoyed.
"I know, you idiot! That's why we brought this thing." The leader
brought a small red jewel from within his cloak. "Fire!" He shouted
softly. A small burst of super heated fire came bursting out of the
jewel, burning down the steel vault. "In!" The raiders got off their
chocobos and entered the ancient vault.
Pitszu woke up with a start. He heard a few screams and thought it was
only a dream. Looking around, he saw a bright flash near the town vault
near his window. He looked outside and saw one of his older friends,
Rh'en, lying on the ground. Surprised, Pitszu ran outside, quickly
changing into his usual long sleeve shirt, a blue vest and a pair of
black pants. Outside, he saw that Rh'en was lying on a pool of blood.
"Rh'en!" He ran towards the injured figure. Pitszu felt a weak pulse
on his neck. "Rh'en! You're alive! What happened?!" He shook Rh'en a
bit. Finally raising his head, Rh'en started to speak in a strained
voice. "Pitszu... the vault... bandits... be careful..." He looked
pleadingly up at Pitszu's face, then his head slumped back down into the
ground.
"Rh'en..." Pitszu looked up, and saw the bandits but down the old man
who kept the vault and burn the lock down. With a face distorted with
fear and hate, Pitszu took Rh'en's short sword and ran towards the
vault.
The leader reached out and dug through all of the treasures. Finally,
he stopped. It seemed as though he found what he was looking for. A
small blue gem appeared in his hands.
"Hehehe..." He started to chuckle mischievously. "The gem of wind..."
His eyes were shining as the red jewel and the blue gem both started to
light up. Sounds of hurried footsteps made the leader of the bandits
and his followers turn around to face a young man in his 20's.
"You..."
Pitszu raised his sword and cut down one of the bandits. "You killed
them... and now you try to steal from us!" He ran forward and met
against the blade of one of the bandits. Quickly swinging his short
sword again and again, Pitszu cut through the bandit's defense
eventually and put a cut through his neck. The leader of the bandits
smiled amusingly and turned around to face Pitszu.
"I am Gurrend. Nice to make your acquaintance." Instead of the
barbaric face of a bandit that Pitszu imagined he would look like,
Gurrend had long silvery white hair, and had a very delicate, or
feminine even, and pale face. He had thick eye brows and shining green
eyes. Pitszu shook his head.
"Dammit, I don't care! You've killed my friends, and now you're
stealing the town's treasure." Gurrend said in a calm pleasant voice,
"Oh, these treasures... I only came for one. Well, I found what I was
looking for. Have a nice day." Pitszu got ready to chase after him.
Gurrend shouted out, loudly this time, "Wind!" A very strong gust of
wind threw Pitszu off his feet, and pushed him back about 30 feet back
into a house. "Fire!" A burst of fire was caught in the gust of wind
and spread through-out the town. Pitszu, immobilized by the shock,
barely watched as the bandits got on the yellow birds and rode to the
top of the cliff.
Amidst the smoke, Pitszu lost his consciousness.
Final Fantasy: The Immortal Elements
(Part 1: Pitszu's Story)
-Prologue End-
To Be Continued (of course!!)...