Well, since I haven't been writing much lately, I might as well do some
more C&C.
re: [BGC][2090] A Knight Alone Pt. 2
by Alex Gray (hitomi@ndirect.com.uk)
Comments: Interesting. Undead, faeries and hardsuits, oh my. Characters
are all right, but I can't help but think Sylia has better control than
she expressed in the bar scene. The interaction between Sylia and the
other Sabers (esp. Linna and Priss) is fascinating, and I can easily see
it happening if things turned out wrong in the past. A bit disjointed
from the first part, but its been a while so I might be imagining
things.
recommended
Re: [Eva] Garden of EVA 1:7 Jail Sucks
by Jim Lazar (jimlazar@earthlink.net)
Comments: I should've been ready for a 'drop the soap' scene after I
read the title, but I was still surprised. A bit heavily lemon scented,
but hey this is Garden of EVA. And it really sucks.
Recommended(This is a great series as long as you can stomach the
perversity, and man is this ever perverse)
Jerico
only reviews fics that he likes.