On Sun, 24 Oct 1999, XStylus wrote:

...I wrote it as fast as I possible could, trying to dump everything in my
brain into a file, to get through the scene at the end of that first
draft.

Yea... there were quite a few holes in here (Ryoga supposedly smashed
someone's head like a melon... who's head was it?). The revision I sent you

Um, no.  Ryouga actually smashed a melon.  It was a joke.

was merely patches. I wanted to work on making it sound a little less
rushed... didn't quite get around that.

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