"Ain't got time, 'Sempai', gotta get to class."

        "You.. you will call me moron..." said a somewhat dazed Kuno,
getting the usual morning conversation backwards, but oddly accurate.
He then fell over, which, after two years of practice, he was very
good at indeed.

Excellent Kuno scene.

 (KAMI-SAMA, but she's enthusiastic!)  "Ah... Naoko.  Naoko
Takahashi."

Erg. You _must_ be kidding.

Impressively believable characterization and character development,
noticeably improved even since "Girl Days". Still ludicrous and weird,
(thankfully) but you've got your pacing down better as well. Where
"Redheads" seems to stop-and-start jumpily, even in the parts we've
seen, this flows much better.
-- 
David Siegel
dhs28@columbia.edu
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"All tautologies are true." -David Kagan