Robert Knighton wrote:

Here's my current pride and joy.  The original took 3rd place for July
in the Best of Ranma 1/2 voting - Oneshots.

Enjoy!

Ranma 1/2: Best Served Cold

    (Snip)

    Lovely. Very intense and well written; my only problem with it is that it
seems you tried to cram too much story into too short a space. Especially
towards the end, where Ranma and Cologne are engaging in all that exposition--it
bogs the story down. Show, don't tell (so much ^_^). Other then that--thumbs up
from me.

    --Paul Herring


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"To desire the end is to desire the means--if you are not willing to do whatever
is
necessary to achieve a goal, then you never wanted it at all."

     --Evira Naldorssen