Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic ideas]
From: Rhea Seraph
Date: 9/7/1999, 3:17 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

On Tue, 7 Sep 1999, Jeremy Evans wrote:

Title(s): Irony, Mother knows best

   After the failed wedding Nadoka takes Ranma and Akane away to Jubaan high 
to get away from their troubles (Not a SM crossover, maybe a few cameos 
though) and to teach Ranma a technique passed down inher family. The 
teachings of the sith. When the Sith were wiped out by the Jedi, 1 

I find this to be an example of an idea that makes no sense.  Nodoka does
not act even slightly like a Sith Lord nor display the slightest hint of
such abilities.  Nor do I think would Soun let Nodoka haul Akane away.

Maybe if this was written like the Sith Academy fanfic series it might be
readable, but I think the basic idea is simply bad.

reluctant to train in this technique because of the prominace of hate and 
anger, but he trusts his mom cause she knows best, or does she. Is Nerima 
ready for an Akane with the dark side of the force as her alley. What 
arguments could Nadoka make to sway Ranma to the darkside of the force.

Should questions end with a question mark.

And I don't think Ranma thinks his mom knows best, or he wouldn't have
spent all that time running away from her.  Nor can I see Ranma
flourishing in the Dark Side.  Now Ryouga, on the other hand...


John Biles
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