In a message dated 7/19/99 11:58:07 PM, katranna@yahoo.com writes:

  As he closed the door behind him, he almost thought
he heard Ukyo whisper �Thank you, Ranchan.  I�ll
always remember.�  But maybe it was just the wind.

Personally, I seriously doubt that Ranma would even consider having sex with 
anyone, let one actually doing it with Ukyo in your fic. Throughout the manga 
series, he has repeatedly has shown embrassment or attempted to ignore naked 
bodies within close proximity to him. More often than not, he runs away from 
any sign of female or sexual affection towards him.

So in this fic, Ranma overcomes this and makes love with his 'best friend' 
(I'm using this term loosely), AND is also aware that he's doing it behind 
the back of a girl whom he loves. I don't doubt that once Akane finds out, 
Ranma's going to be in for a hell of pain. Plus a strained relationship 
between them (Akane'd accuse Ranma of infidelity).

And I'd go on rambling about the possible implications about Ukyo being 
pregnant, which would be a big headache for Tendos and Saotomes. Soun'd void 
the Saotome/Tendo agreement, Akane being furious, Ukyo's child born not of 
wedlock, the inevitable public's reaction and predjuice against her and the 
child.
But I'm not.

Notes: I don�t really know what I�m supposed to say
here, so you can skip this if you like.  This fanfic
doesn�t really have a point, I�ll concede that.

Hey, this fic doesn't have any point... wait, you already said that, didn't 
you? ;)

However, people have said the point is that Ranma�s
friendship with Ukyo is stronger than his love for
Akane.  Maybe.  Maybe not.  It can also be about Ranma

Ranma's friendship with Ukyo strong enough to blind him to Ukyo's feelings? I 
don't think that would be right, but since this is just a character bashing, 
I'll leave it at that. You want to argue the point, email me privately, 
please.

expiating his past mistakes.  Throughout the fic, he
compares Ukyo to a child, a little girl.  Perhaps he
thinks that by doing what he did, he in part made up
for what he did before.  I, personally, thought it was
about a nice thing Ranma did for Ukyo.  That is, until
I showed it to a friend, and she said �That Ranma sure
is a jerk!  What a pervert!�  Okay, when I thought
about it, what was nice for Ukyo wasn�t necessarily so
for Akane.  However, I started it siding with Ranma,
and I still do.  I think what he did was right, under
the circumstances.  He didn�t do it because of any
lechery; in fact, not once does he really think of
Ukyo in romantic terms.  I�d like to hear what you
think about it, though.  

And making love isn't considered 'romantical'? I disgress.


Until I find something new to write, Ja ne-

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