Comments are welcome. I like compliments; I also like having it
pointed out to me where I could have done something a bit better.
Being flamed, however, I don't care for much, and offenders will be
politely told to suck my ass. Same goes for anyone insisting I use
the Japanese names for all characters and Pokemon; I have no
particular reason or desire to do so. I *like* the English names,
thank you very much.

Okay? Okay.

I'm not forcing anyone to use Japanese names. I'm only making them more
available. Pretty good story, though. I always felt that the Nyasu could to
a better job without the two idiots. Something that seems to be missing,
though (No pun intended) is humor. Not much makes me laugh, but there's at
least one joke every 3 episodes that I think is hysterical. Even an argument
about the bike would be good. It's obviously much harder to make jokes for
fanfiction, but some humor would work well. They say laughter is whe best
window to the soul's medicine, or something like that. Otherwise, excellent
beginning, Lurker-sempai.