On Wed, 7 Jul 1999, Donny Cheng wrote:

Jason Liao wrote:

On Wed, 7 Jul 1999, Donny Cheng wrote:

      "Yeah," he managed to croak out, "fine like an engine filled with
sugar."

That means that he'll have to be taken apart, and have each piece cleaned.
Ouch.

(No, I've never poured sugar into anyone's gas tank.  However, I have
thought about it...)

Neither have I... really!

I was counting on that and sure enough, I was
noticed by all as I answered the teacher glibly and made my way slowly
to a seat not far from the top where I entered.

Wish that worked for me.

Same thing, I've been in the Keiichi role more times than I care to
remember and still a few years of U left :(

True.  But at least your professors care.  Most of mine just treat classes
as time away from valuable research or work.

      "Uh, sorry.  I had to get up to go the bathroom," Keiichi said, bowing
with comic exaggeration.

      I frowned inwardly at the save.

I frowned outwardly.  Just how did that work again?

Saying that she's feeling the emotions that come with frowning, but not
showing it outwardly.

I meant, how did Keiichi's actions help her?  Was he running interference,
or making a fool out of himself, so that the professor forgot?

rest of the workload on him.  The next day we found him asleep in a
spotless dancehall.  He didn't blame me for what happened and said 'told
you so' when I was mobbed by a group of guys the moment I hit the
campus.  "See?  I doubt you'll ever have a problem with finding a date
no matter how late it is."

Ha!

Keiichi's just one of many clueless guys in anime/manga.  Most of which
I seem rather fond of for some reason. :P

Hmm...Jinnai is pretty clueless.  So's Kuno.
^_^

Overall, very nice.  Probably not the most profound thing I've ever read,
as that honor goes to Lawson's Nuku Nuku series.  Of course, that also
messed me up for a week.

Having that party scene right after the first classroom scene made me
think that you were going to switch into the present after every memory
scene.  Besides that, I don't have too much more to say, other than I
liked how you handled this.

I might throw in another scene to space it out more.

Probably better that way.

Thanks for the C & C!

-Natsume Ranma Ranma
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The sardines weren't worth the trouble.  A few more shots, then 
Ryoga-san would overheat and explode.  Ducking around a corner, 
I managed to lose him as I entered the ramshackle residence of 
my Anime supplier.

One look at his face and I knew that I was betrayed.  "Tell me."
I insisted.  He refused, so I slammed him against the wall.
"Last chance.  Where can Ranma-Ranma find good fanfics?"
"Try Jason Liao." he whispered, before he slumped to the floor.
I heard the sounds of a door splintering as I left through the 
window, one step ahead of Tendo Heavy Industries...