Chad Walker wrote:

Jason Liao wrote:

On Wed, 7 Jul 1999, Donny Cheng wrote:

<snip most of the C&C>

      I gazed down at him.  He was not that far removed from the
pervert that watched X rated movies that none would believe me if I
were to claim he took advantage of me in his drunken stupor.

believe = disbelieve

This change doesn't really work because it would make the sentence
contradictory, 

No it doesn't.  "None would disbelieve me" means the same thing as 
"Everyone would believe me".  Of course the former comment is more 
pompous in it's double negativity, but isn't she a snobbish girl?  

unless you change 'that none would believe me' to 'that

(people/they) would disbelieve me'. Either way I suggest changing 'He
was not that far removed' to 'He was not so far removed'.