Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic] I Dream of Ranma, Episode 2
From: Larry F
Date: 6/17/1999, 1:43 AM
To: "ffml@fanfic.com" <ffml@fanfic.com>
Reply-to:
lwf58@earthlink.net

Gary Kleppe wrote:

Larry F <lwf58@earthlink.net> wrote:
   While it is true that Kuno didn't try anything more than to get kisses, he
did that twice, so it is not true that he never made any moves on Ranma.  (It
is true that Ranma's moves on Kuno were more provocative.)  Interestingly
enough, Kuno did NOT talk about himself very much; he just tried to get Ranma
to read his diary.

Okay... lemme ask this way:

Do people have a problem with the Kuno/Akane date scene as written? Is
it OOC for Kuno? If so, could it be explained as the wish enforcing
Ranma's concept of a date on the two of them? If not, how should I
change the scene?

Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html

    Not really.  It is perfectly valid interpretation; I feel safe in
thinking the
average reader will find it amusing, which is the whole point of the
story.  I sent
the summary of how Rumiko Takahashi portrayed Kuno on a date as
general info I
thought people might like to know, since the subject had been raised. 
It is not a
criticism of the story.

    Whether or not Kuno is OOC touches on character debate, and as
such is banned
from the list.  I'll send a private email about that.




--
 Ja ne,
 LarryF

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