asking for c'n'c, Michael Chen wrote..

A few minutes passed, and Akane felt ready to act. [..]

   As she slid up and down, [..]

   After an hour, Akane felt the delirium of sex take over [..]

   Under such treatment, neither of them could last long, [..]

--
I'd probably change that 'hour' to ten minutes or less.. if
not for plausibility and conformity with the following
paragraph, then at least for Akane's sake.. an hour of
constant friction right after she lost her virginity will
most likely result in some nasty burns and make her walk
funny for the next few days.. ;P

Tolaris
idly wondering if Ryoga will manage to find his way out of
Akane on his own...
-- 
just before he died, he said:
     "Okay - I'll spin around, brush away the gun in my back with my elbow and
      neutralize the guy with the knife with a backwards kick while throwing a
      shuriken at the one with the shotgun."