Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic] I Dream of Ranma, Episode 2
From: kleppe@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 6/16/1999, 10:46 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Larry F <lwf58@earthlink.net> wrote:
   While it is true that Kuno didn't try anything more than to get kisses, he
did that twice, so it is not true that he never made any moves on Ranma.  (It
is true that Ranma's moves on Kuno were more provocative.)  Interestingly
enough, Kuno did NOT talk about himself very much; he just tried to get Ranma
to read his diary.

Okay... lemme ask this way:

Do people have a problem with the Kuno/Akane date scene as written? Is
it OOC for Kuno? If so, could it be explained as the wish enforcing
Ranma's concept of a date on the two of them? If not, how should I
change the scene?


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html