Subject: [FFML] [C&C] Sasami's Wish
From: "Andrew M. Petalik" <wolf@sbm.org>
Date: 5/18/1999, 12:47 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Prologue:  Sasami's Wish 
A Tenchi Muyo Fanfic by Tyson Roberts (nall@goldengate.net)

For a teaser, this intro doesn't give the reader much of an idea as to
where the story is going.

I like the bigger story impact... but I have no clue if that's going to
play any part in the continuation.

This has potential... but the teaser does nothing to show case it.

I would read it if more came out... but I would like to know a bit more of
the stories intentions.

See ya

  ___________
 / Here lies:\  Save the Whales -> Harpoon a Honda
|   Andrew    | 
|             | The light at the end of the tunnel may be an 
|   I think   | oncoming dragon.
| he's hungry | 
|             | What UNIVERSE is this, please?