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From: Ammadeau <roy.fokker@unspacy.org>
To: ffml@fanfic.com <ffml@fanfic.com>
Date: Tuesday, May 11, 1999 5:14 AM
Subject: [FFML][Ranma][Alt History]Will you be my fiance?

Will You be my Fiance?
An Alternate History of Ranma �

One thing that keeps bugging me about this fic is
that Ranma is as strong as he was in the beggining
of the manga. Now, in this story Genma hasn't trained
with Happosai therefore it would be safe to assume he
isn't stronger and can't be as good (in a relative term of
course) a teacher as his manga self. Also it seems that
Ranma didn't go on the ten year training trip so I don't see
how he could be at the same level of strength as he is
in the manga.
The scene with the Tendos and the Hibikis was poorly done
because we just had to assume Mr. Hibiki was there for most
of the time and no discription was given of him at all.
This could prove an interesting fic although nothing so far has
really caught my attention.

Until I find better things to write about. Ja ne.