Quite, quite interesting. :)
	I remembered the fic idea of switching the generations around, and
perhaps even saw the beginning of a fic written, but that was a little
while ago.... This is an excellent implementation of the idea, I must say.
	Especially how well Rei would fit into Gendou's role. The idea
never occurred to me until now. o.o Now, Touji _would_ make an excellent
hot-headed military man, eh? :)
	If other things map out, I think I can see where Asuka's coming
in, though. :D Anyhow, just a couple of nits that I must pick....

colossal, green, vaguely ape-shaped... thing, that towered before her. 

	Green? I recall Sachiel being black and white, mostly.... Eh, but
it's a minor point. :)

Inside the car, the driver leaned across the seats to look down at her. He
was a young man, probably in his late twenties, wearing a black business

	<snip the rest>
	Quite an excellent piece of description, there. n.n

April 16, 2029

	You are going to explain the later timeframe, yes? :)

of the power necessary for most modern vehicles. Some car owners, however,
still yearned for the raw power of a rumbling, gas-guzzling internal
combustion engine.

	 <snerk>

customer base, had complied; several of the more rugged gar lines now

							  ^^^
	Should be 'car', yes?

"Yeah, I'll take care of it." Shinji replied, scratching the back of his
head thoughtfully. A pensive look occupied his features for several
moments, before it finally succumbed to encroachment of a rather
infectious grin, as a relieved sigh escaped Shinji's lips. "We've finally
found her, haven't we?" 

	I do wonder what the significance of 'finding her' is.... o.o

A small frown formed on Rei's lips as the pickup in her ear caught the

	Hm, a frown is more of a full-face thing, rather than just a
person's lips....

Turning to look down at Misato apologetically, Shinji sat down beside her
and continued to hold the handkerchief to his cheek. "Nuclear missile
defense system; orbital particle beam satellites. They're usually pointed

	O.o
	So, are there still N2s in this universe? :)

"Hey-yoo!" Popping her head out of the manhole, Eimii waved cheerily for a
second, before breaking into a fit of coughs as the cloying cloud of dust
and ash invaded her lungs.

	Eimii-san! n.n

Looking up from its foot, the second angel scanned the skyline for a
moment, before blink-blinking and giving a mildly distubing claw-fisted
thumbs-up.

	Heheh.
	Anyhow, as I said, quite an intriguing piece of work. Eagerly
awaiting more, of course. n.n Take care.

Andrew Huang...Nerdboy@KawaiiMUCK, Hisame00 on AIM
http://www.hcs.harvard.edu/~alhuang/
Harvard Anime Society, President
"Mweh. Heh. Heh."