Stephen Ratliff wrote:
I'm not really sure what to say about this fic just yet. Ranma seems not
quite as skilled as he should be as compared to Akane. Granted Akane hasn't
been away from a good teacher for more than a year, but Ranma HAS been
training at a far greater pace than Akane. It's not TOO unbelievable at the
date you've set it at, but well... we'll see I guess. Akane, hmmmm.... I'm
not really sure right now. It's interesting I'll give you that.
Ranma, Oh hell... just give me some more to read!