Well, here's my two second take on it.
After such an intense orgasm, she should have been panting heavily; however, she lay unnaturally still, the rise and fall of a chest filling
with air curiously absent.
"Um, Rei?" her lover said, "I think you're supposed to breath."
Rei blinked a few times, then her chest started to rise and fall again. "Are we done now?" she asked.
The person on top of her nodded.
"Good," Rei replied, and pushed her lover off of her. She got up and dressed silently. Rei moved to the door, and pasued for a second before going through it. "Shinji was better," she said.
Asuka sat naked on the bed that Rei had just vacated, "Why don't I ever listen to myself when I say I should never have sex when I'm bored?" she mummbled to herself.
End
JG
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|Guide of the training grounds|Ranma 1/2, Tenchi Muyo, BGC, |
|of accursed springs, 8th |AMG, Tank Police, Gall Force, |
|Disciple of Eriond, President|YUA, GitS, ADP, Evangelion |
|of the AMS, and proud member |Project A-ko, UY, VPM, BGC! |
|of the #SkAS# |Darkside Blues, Dragon Century|
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|Akane, Lina, Washu, Nene, |Nene showed Mackie just how |
|Skuld, Belldandy, Kiyone |much she knew. Winter Blossoms|
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On Mon, 29 Mar 1999 14:35:16 The Eternal Lost Lurker wrote:
Gotta love the odd fanfic challenge...so here's an odd fanfic challenge.
The rules for this challenge are simple:
Write a fanfic, of any length, in any series, which begins with the
following sentence:
"After such an intense orgasm, she should have been panting heavily;
however, she lay unnaturally still, the rise and fall of a chest filling
with air curiously absent."
Have fun!
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