Jet Moto was developed by Sony itself, if I'm not mistaken.

I enjoyed this chapter.  Most of the comments I had I've already
given you in the pre-read, but it's been a while and I'm glad to
see you've stuck with this idea.  You show a very good feel
for the individual personalities, and I especially liked your writing
of Akane in this chapter.  

I know you have an involved plot in mind for this story, and I'm 
looking forward to reading more.

Grayson Towler
grayson@rigroup.net

http://www.rigroup.com/~grayson/relentless