I don't get it...  ^_^

Okay, seriously, I found it pretty good.  However, I don't quite agree
with the ending as justice.  Perhaps a God of Honor, or Obligations would
do so, but to punish Ukyou to a life like that is justice?  Also, the
wording wasn't "I want Ranma to care for me." She said she wanted Ranma to
carry out his promise.  The promise was to marry, not to care.

Still, assuming that the actual God in question isn't integral to the fic,
that's all just small stuff.  Still pretty good for under two hours.

-Natsume Ranma Ranma
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The sardines weren't worth the trouble.  A few more shots, then 
Ryoga-san would overheat and explode.  Ducking around a corner, 
I managed to lose him as I entered the ramshackle residence of 
my Anime supplier.

One look at his face and I knew that I was betrayed.  "Tell me."
I insisted.  He refused, so I slammed him against the wall.
"Last chance.  Where can Ranma-Ranma find good fanfics?"
"Try Jason Liao." he whispered, before he slumped to the floor.
I heard the sounds of a door splintering as I left through the 
window, one step ahead of Tendo Heavy Industries...