I think everyone else has covered most of the big points already, so
here are a few nitpicks.

1. Kosaku being listed in the undercard as weighing in at 125 lbs. Not
in a million years. One of the early 1PG stories has him facing the man
he clobbered in his Boxing Test in a grudge match. The guy had been
training for two years to beat the crap out of Kosaku in revenge for the
dentures he now had to wear, and had to eat and eat and eat to catch up
to Kosaku's rise up the weight classes. I believe Kosaku was in the 145
lbm weight class for the fight. There's no way in hell he lost that much
weight for this fight, simply because in the world of 1PG, Kosaku's
strength of willpower just isn't there for him to lose more than 10 lbs,
(and that by laxatives!)

2. What was Sister Angela doing pushing all those bowls of ramen on
Kosaku? If anything, she'd be giving him hell for cheating on his diet!

3. The end was a little sudden, I think. I'm going to have to side with
Gary here, and wonder about Sister Angela's giving up on the Church so
easily. 

A good fic all in all. If B-ko could keep from getting sick all over the
keyboard, she'd tell you herself.

Jamie
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