"No, we merely appeared and you fired the first shot. You can
check the previous records and you'll see that I'm telling truth. Like I
said, you attacked us without provocation. We had to defend us
ourselves."

Us...cut...

Everybody remained silent as Kaworu continued to speak in his reasonable
tone, "We tried to enter the grounds peacefully, but you attacked us
every time, and killed each of our brothers. We Angels have come to
conclusion that you wouldn't be willing to turn over Adam to us..."
Klaxons blared throughout NERV as MAGI detected additional AT
Fields. Afterwards, it was plain chaos.
"Another AT Field detected... Correction! Make it two! No, THREE!

it . . . that...

appeared, "Meet Zeruel, Matarel, and... Bardiel."

When you do get this spamfic up, how about describing each player, so as to
illuminate those that don't know who Zeruel, Matarel and Unit 03 are... ^_^

Meanwhile, Asuka and Shinji was feeling rather afraid right now,

were. . .afraid?  Or rather and afraid don't really mix well...

especially since they were surrounded by six Angels. Three-to-one ratio
against them wasn't good odds. They were about to scream and flee in

Although it is a math term, ratio should be meant plurally, since you used
odds as well.

The Angels closed in to the Evangelions as Kaworu repeated his
proposition; "We challenge you to a baseball game, and the prize will be
Adam. Reject our offer and you will have to die."
Silence ensued until Hyuga finally broke the silence, "How many
rounds?"

Hyuga should know by now how many "innings" there are in a baseball game...

I didn't put in much thought for a while, but this idea just refused to
go away and I had to write it down. Who knows, I just might continue it.
I certainly find this concept rather intriguing. ^_^

Very intriguing indeed, who's gonna umpire?  Lilith?



by

Florencio