Once again, some quite wonderful material for a refreshing take on
the Ranma/Akane relationship. The scenarios you set up make for excellent
character exploration in a very believable manner. I really enjoyed it. :)
	Sorry I can't be of much more use...I'm not that great at
constructive criticism without some serious time and effort, and I'm a
slight bit busy as of late. n.n;;

Andrew Huang...Nerdboy@KawaiiMUCK, Hisame00 on AIM
http://www.hcs.harvard.edu/~alhuang/
Harvard Anime Society, President
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