Subject: [FFML] Re:[Draft][EVA] Garden of EVA 0:8 - Rei's Past Bites!
From: doug_w@mail.geocities.com
Date: 2/14/1999, 9:17 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

At 10:57 AM 2/14/99 -0800, you wrote:
[EVA][Fanfic][Lime] Garden of EVA 0:8 - Rei's Past Bites!
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Garden of EVA 0:8 - Rei's Past Bites!


    Ritsuko sat down and cradled her head in her hands. "Oh god, Rei...
why do you have to be so much like me?"

The moment I read this bit I started to wonder If Ritsuko might actually be
Rei's mother.

(Which, of course, is confirmed later)





This fic is really amazing. It starts out as a joke, yet has taken several
dramatic turns, resulting in a very good story.

However, I do think that the 'theatre' scenes are beggining to wear thin,
especially in this part. The supposedly cannon characters in the theatre
are begging to act more like the non-theatre charcters.

Other than that, this is an excelent fic.