No detail comments, Keener, but I would feel a bit of guilt if I
did not at least say...

...

...

ouch. Heavy.

There were no spelling/grammar/whatever-mistakes bad enough for
me to notice while still in normal, tired reading mode, though
I think the prose didn't quite have your usual, convoluted style.

I think maybe you're going into a bit *too* much detail with the
lieutenant.

...

Did I say, "Heavy"?


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