Hi guys,

I'd like to share with you a fic. that has a very interesting premise.
Interesting plot, and I can't wait for the next part to come out.

Maybe in posting this, and sending the replies to the author, maybe he will
be inclined to continue on with the fic. faster.

Overall, this fic. is a job well done, well, if you don't take in to
consideration some of the errors in sentences and also some logic errors.

Anyway, ciao for now.
Tell the author what you think about the fic. :-)
BTW, I'd like to remind you that I am NOT the author, please reply to the
author at
fire@fl.net.au

Cheers,
Saran.

Oh yeah, I nearly forgot the link, here it is :
http://www.users.fl.net.au/~fire/