I really and truly enjoyed this fic.  However, there was one clear and 
obvious case of poor word choice.  I must insist that it be corrected:

--- the end???

Well, I hope you folks liked it.  Before anyone asks, "Why the Devil?" 
let me head those questions of by saying - 'coz I damn well felt like 

it.  

Plus, if I ever do a follow-up, I guess that's something I'll explain.

Quite obviously, you meant _when_ you do a follow-up, right?  I mean, 
the word "if" in that sentence, and I quote Webster's here, has a 
"conotation that implies the writer would like to be beaten with a large 
wooden mallet," which I think we can all agree is not the meaning that 
should be called for, here, yes?

--Freemage

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