Starrngr@aol.com wrote:

Whoa...  This is dark, gritty, depressing and GOOD!

Thank you.
 

Yes, its a very dark fic, but lets face it... IN BGC the Knight Sabres are a
single point of light in a very dark world.

I mean to keep it that way. On both counts.
 
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Grammar and charecterization both look good, and you couldnt have gotten a
more gibsonesque feel if Gibson himself had written the thing.

Again, thanks. Gibson is certainly one of my favorite SF authors.

I do feel compelled to add a comment...  It would be helpfull to see the Lines
of thought that broght Priss into her Hype addiction.  If this is going to
wind up being a multi parter (Although I think its a good stand on its own
piece) its something that could be handled later,  if not, "inquiring minds
want to know" et all...

I plan on it being a multi-part story, but it won't be written on a very
ambitious time scale. Between building a (yea gods...) Barbie-scale
dollhouse for my daughter, and being armpit deep in paint and cels for
an art project for Richard Lawson (HOW many cels and backgrounds do I
need to paint, Bridget?!), my December is booked solid.

As for the Hype, it isn't really a substance that causes physical
addiction. A psychological need might develop, but this stuff doesn't
really give you any kind of 'high.' More on this to come.

Jamie
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