| Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma/Starcraft][cameo OMB!/SM]Second Star Pre & Chp. 1 |
| From: Skuld62382@aol.com |
| Date: 12/5/1998, 8:31 PM |
| To: Ohmen1@aol.com, FFML@fanfic.com |
I really like the beginning and its original and all but I think you should explain why Ranma is immortal. PS- Do you have anymore parts written?