Hard as it is for me to believe, I finally made it to the fifteenth chapter of
my story, and it is turning into a big one. :)  Part two of it is posting today
and I hope to have the third part done by the weekend.  I am not sure if there
will be a fourth part for this chapter at this time.

Anyway, I have been looking over my early chapters and I am dissatisfied with
them, so I plan to rewrite and greatly expand them.  I will also be continuing
the story as well.

I want to make this story the best that I can, so I need a few brave souls to
volunteer to be pre-readers for me.  You just have to be willing to rip my story
apart and point out any weaknesses or continuity errors that might crop up as
well as suggestions for any additions that might be needed.

If interested, please reply by private email to me.  Thanks.

Jurai Knight